rate_review Reviews

Hi! I just found this story, and I really love it! I love the way that you write the characters! For the next chapter, I don\'t personally have a huge preference between angst or smut in this case. As long as the angst doesn\'t take over the story! I do think that if you do angst, that Severus should have the nightmares, to give Harry some more understanding that he hasn\'t had a very nice past either! And so Harry can comfort him of course! If you do the smut, I do think that next chapter, Severus should be bottom, relinquish some control! I also love the fact that Hermione owns a BDSM Club! She isn\'t a favorite character of mine in the least, but I do think that this is a new and interesting take on her! Anyway, please update as soon as is possible!

Yay thanks for the extra long chappy. I recognised the magic circle ritual and think it is a nice touch for you to share your beliefs with your readers if indeed they are your beliefs. I also noticed the lack of description when came to the lord and lady and commend you on it.

Well ndone update and see you later.

*Eowyns elixure

Yay!!!! An update! Wow, that was wonderful *happy squeal*! I think that they should go to bed and both of them can reflect (and maybe angst) on all of these new ideas about each other (sort of \'if I tell him this, he might...\'), and in the morning they can share what they\'ve learned before the smut can begin (so we get the best of both worlds). I especially loved the idea of calling on the Mother for advice - how creative! Eeeee, I can\'t wait for the next chapter!

hey there!
I\'m very glad you have finally decided to update this story. i love the new chapter, it\'s really good.
well, as for my opinion, i think you could do something half and half, not too much angst and not too much smutt... maybe a nightmare or two, but snape being all kind and stuff to harry, like, advising him, comforting him, ... in his own way...
harry bottom!! snape top!! ^.^
thank you for your e-mail!!

hey i love your story and i think you must put in the nightmare and the smut in one chapter please come back soon with another chapter.

I\'m so glad that you added another chapter! I have to admit, I was beginning to worry a little bit . . . but I think it was worth the wait! Another excellent chapter. Did I detect hints of Wicca in there? It\'s all good. I really liked the casting of the circle and the meeting with the Lady, and I thnk you did it very well. Anyway, as far as future chapters go . . . first off, I hope they don\'t take as long coming! ;-) Second, I think a bit of angst might be a good thing, Harry struggling within himself to follow the Lady\'s advice and Severus struggling to help him. And just for fun there could be a little smuttiness thrown in! ;-) Anyway, thanks again for the wonderful entertainment, and I hope to read more soon!!

Smut Smut Smut I need Smut and as to who should be the bottom I think they Should Switch off. Ok love the story Keep it up. Mai Malfoy (Beautiful Bad Faith)

That was a really spiritual piece of writing, I was crying with Harry, so good. thank you.

Next chapter, I think Harry deserves lots of lovely loving, with Severus pressing him onto the bed, or desk, or long piled rug in front of a
glowing fire, but I will leave it up to the expert.

Best Wishes.

I finally got a username! LoL. Loved this chapter! *thinks* Damn... I\'m not sure which one I want! I want smut, but I also want nightmares... Majority rules on this one. But whichever one...

Nightmares: Severus is comforted by Harry.
Smut: Harry bottoms.

Blessed Be!

I love this story. I just found it tonight in an attempt to kill some time and ended up reading all 23 chapters! I love the harry/snape pairing and i love what you\'ve done with harry in this story. Hermione isn\'t too shabby either. I always knew she would go wild from all those years of studying. please update soon and if you have a mailing list for when your stories are updated please put me on it. (I love David Allen Coe!)
and please help yourself to an assortment of my finest chocolates to inspire your muse!
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