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That was wonderfully angsty. *dabs at her eyes* If I wasn\'t sick with strep, I\'d cry.

God the angst! Another wonderfully written chapter - definitly put me through the emotional wringer. I feel so incredibly sorry for them both! Like I just want to hug them - people in pain make me want to help in any way I can. I know that I also demanded smut, but this chapter was definitly worth putting that off. Thank you for updating!

Ok so I like the chapter for angst its good but I want smut plz plz plz. Love it Keep writing Mai Malfoy(Beautiful Bad Faith)

Nice piece of angst! As usual you managed to convey the feelings of Harry and Sev beatifully.
The panic attack of Severus was well written and i almost cried at the chapter.
I loved this chapter.
Carry on, woman, but next time make us smile a little, ok?
LOL
See you around!
Relic

At least they\'re being open now. A whole lot more skeletons, but I know they\'ll make it through.

Blessed Be

This is a truly wonderfully written story. The plot line carries itself, and the wonderful description only adds to it! I\'d feel funny if I left the review at that though. My creative writing classes tell me that I should add something to the story, so here goes...

Your descriptive writing is beautiful. Try adding a few more here or there. There are times when they are warrented and I wanted to read your beautiful prose.

That\'s really it. I could care less if the next chapter is clean or full of the ever present fuck bunnies (although we all love the second).

Thank you for a fantastic story (and a nice presentation of circle casting ;) )

-Onyx

lightgoddess,

Just found and read all 24 chapters. Love the twists and turns, it\'s really imaginative. Great writing style with appropriate grammar and spelling, it always helps. Just loved the circle bit and thanks for keeping it not wiccan/pagan. Not that I don\'t like that stuff, but not here.

As for the next chapters, read that plural, Harry needs to start having angst, some on Severus\' part wouldn\'t hurt either. It would make Harry trust him more to know he\'s not alone and someone does understand what he\'s going through.

Well, of course Harry topped with Hermione, how could he bottom with her????? Maybe I just don\'t understand M/M sex. It might help Harry to conquer his lack of self assurance if he did top Severus, just once at least.

Yes, lots of smut and parseltongue smut and long, slow tortuous smut and lots of descriptive scenes of tight bodies, shivering and moans and panting. MORE, MORE, MORE.

So, just how long will you take to write all that????? Lots of cookies, chocolate and whatever beverage your muses like to get you to write soon. Please email me with information on when you update.

Wonderful story, every time I come across it I have to read it again. As for your question, i am sure it has already been answered by the four but just in case. I think that the nightmares is a good idea and for some reason i find myself leaning to see a glimpse inside Snape\'s mind. I am sure that alot of issues have come up with what just happened. Oh well no matter how you write it i am sure that it will be great.

Goodness I absolutley adore this story!

Umm.. I think that Id rather nightmares over smut in the next chapter, and have Severus comfort Harry

Hi!
It\'s nice to see you back! I , also, have been away for some time!
And look what i miss!!!
Loved very much these two chapters, and yuo continue awe me with the away you write. Keep it up!
Now, i prefer the smut *Rolls her eyes*, because in this last chapter had already some angst.But why not mix both things?
Harry must be desperate to show and feel love as much as Severus...so why not both of them being bottoms in turns?
Hope you can update soon.
And i loved your not so goody-goody Hermione!!!
See you around.
Relic