rate_review Reviews

Well HELLO! sorry I missed reviewing the last chappie but i\'ve had a few scares with my health and bin in and out of hospital which has ment that I\'ve been on the net less often than I\'d like. Anyway I\'m getting of the point but a little earlier today I went on the site HpFandom and I found this story, I think you\'ve posted up to chappie 9 on there and I\'m like hmmm I\'ve read this before so I can on Aff and lol and behold I found it!!! I still love it as much as ever and have been in serious need of a decent Snarry fic for ages no-one seems to write decent Snarry anymore the only other story with good snarry at the moment that i\'ve found is Wooing a Slytherin by Magdelena...which is totally different from your fic. Anyways I\'ve gone randomly off point again, I love your story and although your mused forced you to go the angst route last chappie I enjoyed it cos I know some smut is mostly likely gonna be headed our way in the near future. Anyways I can\'t remember if I sed this last time I reviewed but I adore your characterization of Snape, so many people I know write him and get him wrong. Not that I blame them, I find it hard to write Snape in character myself but your Snape is so delciously....Snapey *licks lips*....hehe. Can\'t wait for an update and i\'m glad that I\'m back on track!

Nice, like the glimpse into what might have been Snape\'s past. I think it turned out to be a really good chapter, can wait for smut with good writting like that.

RAWR! Evil cliff hanger! PLEASE update soon! Your story is good, Snape is a little over the top on the fluff, but overall it\'s a good story.

Wow! That chapter was very heavy on the emotional aspect. I liked it a lot and it was very well written, though.
Was the idea all your own?? I have many times imagined what Severus\' childhood would have been like, but I find your story is much more fitting than any I have come up with. Congrats! ^.^ I do have to admit I feel bad about Severus, he\'s my absolutely favorite character. ^.^\'
Hope you keep updating soon. I am very curious as to what Severus\' next admiton may be.
Until next time!! ^.^

Excellent!!!!! Can hardly wait for the rest of the story!!!! Please don\'t made us wait too long!

That was good but rather interesting, its not every fic that you see Harry comfort Sev from a nightmare and such, interesting though. Update soon please

I liked the angst, just sitting on the edge of my chair waiting to unravel their histories, knowing what they went through, showing their shame and regret....then it ended! Oh, my angst! Can you feel it? I should have voted for 3000 words of smut! Lol ....but I know that it\'s coming soon.

The chapter was good, but yeah, I feel like something was missing; like there was no body to the story, so to speak. Maybe, if you put in an undercurrent of feeling, something to revert back to from time to time, it could carry through these sections, when the story line is kinda light...??? Not trying to flame you, just a suggestion. You are a great writer and are able to articulate lots of emotion, sensuality, feeling, angst, and yeah raw smut into your stories. I just hope that after Severus and Harry bare all of their pasts, or whatever part they are going to bare to each other, that they don\'t fall into comfort with each other and have sex. This is a very touching part of their lives, something they\'ve both kept hidden for a long time, especially Severus. Don\'t get me wrong, I really like the sex parts, especially with some adventure or new thing thrown in, but there\'s a time and place (usually, lol) for it. I hope you agree, if not, write lots of smut!

still an enjoyable chapter, could way to show how the two have similar backgrounds in their past. Can\'t way to see the rest.

nice ^_^

more please

Good chapter, but it makes me angry, because I think I have a pretty good idea what Sev\'s going to reveal next. If I\'m right it\'s something like \'his father was very lonely after his mother was gone.\' Am I right? And please don\'t misunderstand . . . I\'m not angry with you for writing it or using it in your story because it fits very well, it\'s just a sore spot with me and it makes me angry that situations like that happen.

Other than that . . . really good work! The depth of your characters is still wonderful, and the flow of events is very fluid and true-to-life. I can\'t wait to read more! Thanks, as always, for the wonderful entertainment, and please update soon!

P.S. I\'m also enjoying several of your other works, and am looking forward to more of them, too! ;-)