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for To Teach

by lightgoddess

person Relicwitch
schedule January 7, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Another good chapter, and...another cliffie!
Are you sure you don\'t love to torture us with them...but then again it\'s what\'s making me read.
Keep up!
Hope you can update soon enough.
Bye.

P.S.: Call me Relic, it\'s easier.
LOL
person Anon
schedule January 6, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Wow! Great first kiss!
person Papaya
schedule January 6, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Another lovely chapter, full of quietly raging emotion. Your command of the English language is superb, and your ability to pluck at the hearts of your readers is impeccable. Thank you for the wonderful, continuing entertainment! Perhaps next chapter Severus will give in the the temptation just enough for another kiss? As always, thank you again and please update soon.
person Kat
schedule January 6, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I\'ve just discovered this fic, yay. I love it. I love a slow build up to a relationship and I can\'t wait to find out more of what\'s going on with both Harry and Severus. I too cannot wait to find out what is going on for Severus, I can\'t wait for more.

Hugs

Kat
person caffre
schedule January 5, 2005 at 12:00 AM
hi, just a note to say how much i\'ve enjoyed reading your story so far and that i hope you update soon. i fely my heart thudding in my chest when they kissed and it seems unfair and cruel that it was the last chapter! please finish the story! there are so many wip out there that are never finished and i hope this isn\'t one of them.

cheers

Caffre
person Papaya
schedule January 5, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I want more!!!! I\'m really enjoying this story . . . can\'t wait to see what happens next! Easing into the relationship is a good thing, I like that they didn\'t jump into the sack with their first kiss. Anyway, thanks for the wonderful entertainment and keep up the good work!
person Relicwitch
schedule January 5, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Hi!
Only now Istart to read your story, and i\'m sorry for it.
It\'s very well written,and you sure know how to keep the suspense high.
I hope you don\'t take long to review.
The cliffies are killing me!
See you soon.
person Relicwitch
schedule January 5, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Ohhhhhhhh......Are you really sure that Severus will
sleep in room all summer????Hope not.
I\'m waiting for the next one.
And don\'t try to fool me....you love to get reviews telling you that you can\'t stop now
;))
see you soon.
person cdkobasiuk
schedule January 4, 2005 at 12:00 AM
oh no I need more. Good writing. You are putting an interesting spin on this one.

cdk
person xlandax
schedule January 4, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I know how it feels to have no reviews! Wonderful story... I can\'t wait for more. I love the setting. It\'s so original and different. Nice to see someone not using cliches! Update ASAP!