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January 11, 2005 at 12:00 AM
This chapter was a bit more light-hearted than usual . . . I liked it! Everybody needs to have a little fun once in a while. And the image of Severus and Harry performing a kata (is that what it\'s called in Kung-Fu? I know that\'s the karate term for it, but . . . anyway) together is very much a delightful one! ;-) And Harry certainly seems to be in a playful mood . . . how will Severus respond, I wonder? Will we see a little fun with ice cream? You continue to enthrall me with your mastery of wordplay. As always, thank you for the wonderful entertainment, and please update soon!
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January 10, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Another exsquisitely done chapter! Although I must say it\'s what I\'ve come to expect from you;-) I like that Severus is wooing Harry, and that the steps are still slow and steady. A kiss here and there and many heartfelt conversations, a bit of timidity combined with assurance . . . the tale continues to be wonderful! As always, thank you for the wonderful entertainment, and please update soon!
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January 9, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Another nice chapter!
Let\'s wait for the next one....But one with a evil cliffie....I missed it ;)
See you soon.
Relic
Let\'s wait for the next one....But one with a evil cliffie....I missed it ;)
See you soon.
Relic
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January 9, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Chapter 1; bravo! i love long haired harry,maked him sexy and YAY! snarky newss makesme happy!
Chapter 2; allpraise the great writer of snarky bastards! yes! snaky harry, snarky snape, what more could any one ask for?
NEVER STOP WRITIG
aden
Chapter 2; allpraise the great writer of snarky bastards! yes! snaky harry, snarky snape, what more could any one ask for?
NEVER STOP WRITIG
aden
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January 9, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Chapter 3: YAY drunken fun! alwayse great,you never know wat\'s ging to happen when your drnk ^^
Chapter4: hangovers, every drinker\'s bain in life...ERG poor snarky sexy men with the sexy long hair and sexy snarkyness....hmmmm sexy
haha, that was a helpfull, usefull comment, yeah? haha!
NEVER STOP WRITING
Aden
Chapter4: hangovers, every drinker\'s bain in life...ERG poor snarky sexy men with the sexy long hair and sexy snarkyness....hmmmm sexy
haha, that was a helpfull, usefull comment, yeah? haha!
NEVER STOP WRITING
Aden
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January 9, 2005 at 12:00 AM
chapter5; huzza! labrinths are fun! and a half naked severus is alwayse a nice thing to wake up to, yes?
chapter6: indead, can\'t miss a half naked severus, oh no, can;t miss that at all! half naked snarky bastark..nope, deffinatly can\'t miss that
yay another mindblowing comment, yeah? HAHA!
NEVER STOP WRITING
Aden
chapter6: indead, can\'t miss a half naked severus, oh no, can;t miss that at all! half naked snarky bastark..nope, deffinatly can\'t miss that
yay another mindblowing comment, yeah? HAHA!
NEVER STOP WRITING
Aden
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January 8, 2005 at 12:00 AM
You shall update now! You shall! ;) I absolutely love this story!
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January 8, 2005 at 12:00 AM
You are really a evil person.
This one it\'s the most evil of cliffies!
But i\'m starting to appreciate them.
I\'m loving the slow way that the relation has taken, and the way you write the insecurities of our Sevvie.
Now i\'m waiting to know more!
Hope you can update soon enough.
Bye.
This one it\'s the most evil of cliffies!
But i\'m starting to appreciate them.
I\'m loving the slow way that the relation has taken, and the way you write the insecurities of our Sevvie.
Now i\'m waiting to know more!
Hope you can update soon enough.
Bye.
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January 8, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I\'m really enjoying this. It a really good story.
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January 8, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Slow and sensual . . . I\'m loving every minute of it! Your instinctual ability to draw out emtional responses from your readers never ceases to amaze me! ;-) I\'m very much looking forward to seeing where the foodplay is going to lead . . . another slow step toward consummation, perhaps? As always, thank you very much for the wonderful entertainment, and I wait with bated breath for your next update.
PS: I\'ve been toying with the idea of writing my own Severus/Harry fanfic, but and slightly intimidated by it, especially considering the caliber of the talent of those who would be my fellows, especially you. Any advice? If so, thank you, and if not, I completely understand.
PS: I\'ve been toying with the idea of writing my own Severus/Harry fanfic, but and slightly intimidated by it, especially considering the caliber of the talent of those who would be my fellows, especially you. Any advice? If so, thank you, and if not, I completely understand.