rate_review Reviews

Great Danes over there are known by another name- one JKR is no doubt familiar with:
boarhound.

Thank you for a great story. Thank you for real enjoyment

wondurful

This is one of the best written and most touching Snarry stories I have read on this site or any other for that matter. You are a truly gifted writer and I look forward to reading much more from you.

*tear* That was wonderfully written, it even made me cry! Such a beatiful story, and I\'m usually not one for drawn out stories, this again was wonderful and I hope to read more of you\'re stories. This is just...beyond words, I loved it! WRITE MORE ^_____^

This is really a beautiful piece of writing. *BUT* it\'s so far OOC, it\'s not really what I and probably many others want to read. Maybe you should try writing original fiction instead of fan fiction.

Also, try not to have characters tell lengthy stories to explain things. Dish out the facts bit by bit. Readers like it a little mystery and *love* it as the mystery is slowly revealed.

I hope this isn\'t too harsh. I don\'t want to discourage you. I see wonderful talent in your writing.

I have been waiting a long time to finally come across a decent peice of fiction using \"The Unforgiven\" as I love the song and it\'s counterpart \"The Unforgiven II\" dearly. At one point I fleetingly considered writing my own but decided to hold off and continue my search over the various ntworks and archives of the internet. This is the first I have found that truly exceeded my expectations and made the nearly two years worth it all. For that I thank and congratulate you and encourage you to continue to create and take pride in your work. I hope to see more from you in the future.

Until then,
RooksInTheRain

Pretty, Pretty, Pretty.

Thank you for finishing this, I\'ve waited.

Such a sweet ending and lovely story. I really loved the songs you choose. It really made the story more poignant.

Great writing.

Have only one word to say to this...Sweet. I enjoyed this one, left me with a warm fuzzy feeling.

Lightgoddess,

Oh Wow Oh Wow! What a truly beautiful story, coupling not only my fav m/m partners but also so intelligently written with a love for music and animals. The long chapters kept me entralled.

You must keep writing this story. The premise that Harry is blind and can only see through his animal partner, while not being dependent is soooo juicy. I just know there\'s a way that Severus can \'help\' him with living a very fulfilling life, nevermind any adventures they might have together.

Your writing style is terrific and very easy to follow, though I sometimes wonder how Harry doesn\'t trip up. Maybe another plot bunny will scamper through.....????? Please!