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March 24, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Chrissy dear do continue soon!
Peace out!
-Mia
Peace out!
-Mia
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March 19, 2005 at 12:00 AM
looks interesting
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March 19, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Hmm. Curious. Please continue with chapter 4/3.
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January 26, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I\'m reviewing Nana-nee-chan! Please update pretty please???!!!??? >_<
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January 15, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Update Nana!
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January 8, 2005 at 12:00 AM
good errr ficcy like I mumbled earlier...good yea... well keep up the good work Nana...
-lil Mia-kins
-lil Mia-kins
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January 7, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I love this...
You\'re doing a great job at portraying the emotion, which is always an important thing...
I like that your chapter wasn\'t so short, also...
the story line\'s a great one, too...
I\'m looking forward to more; I want to see what Harry does when he finds out...
<-- interest piqued
You\'re doing a great job at portraying the emotion, which is always an important thing...
I like that your chapter wasn\'t so short, also...
the story line\'s a great one, too...
I\'m looking forward to more; I want to see what Harry does when he finds out...
<-- interest piqued
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January 6, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I appreciate the way that you weave your words. There are a few minor mistakes, but once you establish yourself with a good beta reader, those should disappear and allow your readers to compliment you on your poetry rather than focus on the errors. The story itself seems a bit contrived, but I\'ll give you the benefit of the doubt and wait for whatever spark of originality you plan to use to ignite my interest. That said, there can never really be enough \"Draco as a victim of Lucius\" stories, can there? Nice work. I look forward to seeing where you take it. ~Cheers.
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January 6, 2005 at 12:00 AM
O.O
\"HELP Draco he\'s my favorite character!!!\"
(I know that\'s kind of creepy) O.o
\"Get Harry to get it through his thick scull that Draco has been raped and save him!!!
BTW great start!!!!
\"HELP Draco he\'s my favorite character!!!\"
(I know that\'s kind of creepy) O.o
\"Get Harry to get it through his thick scull that Draco has been raped and save him!!!
BTW great start!!!!
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January 6, 2005 at 12:00 AM
so not a crappy chapter!
yay for harry take care of draco!
the thing i liked about the story
that its draco! you didnt change him to be some angsty teen
that doing many things that are so un-draco
waiting for more..
yay for harry take care of draco!
the thing i liked about the story
that its draco! you didnt change him to be some angsty teen
that doing many things that are so un-draco
waiting for more..