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I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?

hey

Well hermione should look for the town closes to where the battle went down. And knowing that he didnt have any muggle money she should check places where he might exchange stuff for muggle money. Then she should check for any places that are small but comfortable. LOL sorry anyways good story snape is soo cute when hes sweet to kids.

tina

I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?

an interesting story you've got there. it has alot of potential so keep it up. a few tweaks here and there, but overall very nicely written. let me know if u ever want some help.

later,
chris

Really great! please add! I sound like a broken record don't I? Oh well it can't be helped ^_^
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This IS GREAT! Please add more! When is Hermoine and Snape going to get together? I can't wait!
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This is a really good read so far! I cant wait for the next upcoming chapters!

Ok. I have no idea what\'s wrong with this site that I can be logged in but it still doesn\'t show as such when I try to review, but whatever. Not really my problem.

Anyway, I just want to say how much I\'m enjoying this story and I hope you update soon.

I was thinking about what you asked in regards to Snape leaving a clue that Hermione would recognize, and I was thinking that something about one of his potions should somehow fall into her hands (like the hair potion/tonic he was contemplating). Maybe something that makes the potion work so perfectly that it\'s clear to her who made it? Or maybe something subtle about the packaging that alerts her? Maybe?

Anyway, please update soon! It looks like it\'s been at least 5 months since your last update!

She should find the vial. The vial of the potion that Snape took. Since it was such a strong potion traces of the potion should still be detectable. Hermione could take that back, get it analyzed, and ask around Muggle cities for a man that meets his description.

Or at least, that\'s what I think...

Good story by the way, I really like it. Please continue with it and update again as soon as possible

~CR

Ok, this one has definate squee-power. I luff it! It is so interesting..... I love Lisa, she is just too cute.... Little theif who likes to play with the roses..... Poor deamon child, hehe. Anyways, update soon, this is wondiferus!
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