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for Without Rhyme or Reason

by Kindli

person Thalia
schedule December 26, 2004 at 12:00 AM
This is a well written piece of work, It is a solid story line with characters, though off canon, that are explained strongly into the current story. I look forward to more in this story and of your future writings.
person Priss368
schedule December 25, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I was really pleased to see this posted on this website! I had read this on bottom!draco & felt that it was well put together & quite original. Can\'t wait to see how many hits & reviews you get. Priss
person Dadella
schedule December 25, 2004 at 12:00 AM
wow... that was amazing!

a touch quick, jumping straight into it like that, but if we hadn\'t been from Harry\'s pov, then that might\'ve been easier...

I loved the detail you used, and the emotion the characters radiated...

You also didn\'t leave anything slacking... you are definately a good author...
person Remi
schedule December 25, 2004 at 12:00 AM
ombj that was good! i\'m not totally into the Draco being like bottom but two thumps up to you! lol will there be more? jw well Happy Christmas & New Years Remi
person sak
schedule December 24, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Not only well-written, but excellent pacing and story. Not my usual cup of tea, but a good writer makes everything better. Nice progression from blackmailing to true feelings.
person never_tempt
schedule December 24, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Absolutely great! I never really liked the sub/dom but this was tastefully done and it worked well. Keep up the good work!
person Zarah
schedule December 24, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I read this a long time ago, but I\'m not sure where. I enjoyed it then, and I enjoyed now. I bookmarked it this time so I can keep on enjoying it.
I don\'t remember reviewing it last time, so here\'s your much belated \"Great Job!\"
person Twen
schedule December 24, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Oh, you posted it here too! That\'s great, now even more people can see what a talented writer you are and enjoy the beautiful dynamics between our favorite boys. Plus, hopefully all those dozens of reviews you are certain to get, will encourage you to write that sequel you talked about ;)
person Kendra Lee
schedule December 24, 2004 at 12:00 AM
*whistles* Wow, that was good, like really damned good. One question, is there more? lol I love your style, and your writing is fab, if OOC (not that I care in the least). Keep it coming, I\'ll keep reading.