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by Redrum

person emily
schedule December 23, 2004 at 12:00 AM
this story is so sad, please please write a sequel????????
person emily
schedule December 23, 2004 at 12:00 AM
this is me again... i just have a question, in the story it mentioned that before it all started when Sev and draco was just \'friends\' sometimes sev would stay late at draco\'s late at night............... sis they have any sex? dosn\'t that make sev cheat on harry? how could he do that to harry?
person am
schedule December 23, 2004 at 12:00 AM
i just want to say what a good story this is ...please write more ...
so severe is unwilling to have sex with harry because draco is 2 rooms over, yet he can have sex with draco eventhough he is cheating on harry? what a jerk
person Kat Potter
schedule December 23, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Aww, that is so sad. I really liked it though. Could you maybe make a sequel?
person Sydney
schedule December 23, 2004 at 12:00 AM
This story is just begging for a sequel. you know how you said that Severus had helped Harry with his cutting problem? Obvioulsy he was depressed, so what if he takes the break up hard and starts cutting again? So many things can happed with that scenario. Say Harry nearly kills himself and Severus starts to feel guilty about it and realises that choosing to stay with Draco was a bad choice. Draco was selfish and did all he could to take Severus away from Harry, shouldn\'t Severus see that that was wrong, and go back to Harry? I\'d like it very much if you wrote a sequel, even if it isn\'t the one I suggested. I\'d like to see how everybody copes with the break up, especially Harry and Severus. Well written story by the way. Thanks
person Sydney
schedule December 23, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Oh yeah, and like the other reviews, you nearly had me in tears by the end. Story deffinetly needs a sequel.
person emily
schedule December 22, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Awwwe, that was so sad! *at a loss for words*
person Anon
schedule December 22, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Wow. I was very moved by this. Though, I was desparately hoping for a happy ending between Snape and Harry, I enjoy the way you ended this. It fit more with the story. Is there a possibility of a sequal?
person Ange
schedule December 22, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Oh My God! Tears! Those two Slytherins are utter bastards! It was good writing, even if I didn\'t particularly like the plot. It had me blubbering like a baby, so if that\'s what you for, congratulations, you got your wish! Well done! :)