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for Albus's Scheme

by Acadiaelle

person ladyevilfaerie
schedule March 19, 2005 at 12:00 AM
WOO HOO! Another chapter I am glad that another one came out and just to let you know I hated Albus before I started reading your story, but now I hate him even more. What he said at the ministry really pissed me off. Just for that I would like to castrate him and hang him with his beard *evil grin*, not that I already wanted to do that to him in the first place *coughs*. Anyway I completely understand why Hermione and Severus held there tempers at the ministry, they didn\'t want to get into trouble. I loved the chapter and I will patiently await more. TTFN, SAYOONARA!!

P.S. I hope Hermione announces that she is pregnant soon if that is what you have planned but then again now is really not the best time for pregnancies, but one can only hope *sighs and bats eyelashes*.
person JTBJAB
schedule March 19, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I loved that Hooch bit, i couldn\'t stop laughing.....and man, i would hexed Dumbledore if i had been Severus! But then i had no self control!
person Moi
schedule March 19, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Very exciting chapter. That Dumbledore just inspires hexes in his general direction.

A couple of notes: This was unbetaed? Two misuses of \"then\" when you meant \"than.\" Misspelling in the title. And during the Auror interview, was Hermione struck dumb in anger at the false allegations? Why didn\'t she slap Dumbledore for calling her a whore? Was she under a full Body Bind? She slapped Malfoy for less, and she let the whole party of them ride over a feeble objection. It was all very exciting, but I didn\'t get why she wasn\'t standing up for herself, why she and Severus both just sat there.
person Lana Manckir
schedule March 11, 2005 at 12:00 AM
UPDATE! LOL i can\'t wait to know and i have some idea of who\'s behind it but won\'t say it. Please hurry ;-)
person anyah_daoc
schedule March 10, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Ack! Ya can\'t leave me like this! Please update soon! Thanks for a great story!
person Dark Topaz
schedule March 3, 2005 at 12:00 AM
pleae update soon
person Moi
schedule February 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Irresistable. I can\'t wait to read the next chapter! (I liked Severus\' little inner debate.) (I\'m still hating Albus.)
person Unicorn Lady
schedule February 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
hmmmmm.... Knowing your devious mind I\'m tempted to say that whomever it was he/she was working under Dumbledore\'s orders to kill Hermione? That would certainly be a plot twist right there! Did I get it right?
person eve/roarke
schedule February 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Oh, now thats cruel ending the chapter like that, very unfair to us readers, to make us feel better we need a new
chapter to be updated soon, please (I\'m not proud I\'ll beg).

Great fanfic, thanks..

person Sami
schedule February 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I Love this story!