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June 25, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Slower! Slower updates! I think i am gonna cry....i love this story and it is just getting to the action pact part!
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June 25, 2005 at 12:00 AM
It\'s awesome, as always.
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June 24, 2005 at 12:00 AM
It has been a long time sonce i have givena reveiw as most stories are not worth it. This story is and i would like to say that it is one of the best stories i have ever read. I wish for it to be continued to completion. Please update soon again as ther are very few stories that i can read over and over and this is one of them. Please update and keep up the good work!
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June 24, 2005 at 12:00 AM
please update this soon i love this story
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May 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Oh I am loving this! Very, very good. Another great story from you.
I really HATE Mean!Albus, but I\'ve always thought that if Hermione and Severus really DID get together, that Albus wouldn\'t take it with a twinkle in his eyes and offering Lemon Drops. LOL. I guess his reaction here is closer than most. :-)
Anyway, I hope you update soon. Oh, and I am SOOOOOOOOOOO excited that you are doing a sequel to The Incident in the Great Hall! It is one of my absolute favourites and I was so upset when it ended before we got to meet the baby. Yay! You have made my day! ;-) Just out of curiousity, when do you expect the first chapter to be up?
I really HATE Mean!Albus, but I\'ve always thought that if Hermione and Severus really DID get together, that Albus wouldn\'t take it with a twinkle in his eyes and offering Lemon Drops. LOL. I guess his reaction here is closer than most. :-)
Anyway, I hope you update soon. Oh, and I am SOOOOOOOOOOO excited that you are doing a sequel to The Incident in the Great Hall! It is one of my absolute favourites and I was so upset when it ended before we got to meet the baby. Yay! You have made my day! ;-) Just out of curiousity, when do you expect the first chapter to be up?
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May 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I haven\'t read your story yet, but I just wanted to say that I think this disclaimer page is a good idea. Many people I have spoken to object to HG/SS on moral grounds and you have dealt with that had on. Brilliant idea.
One question though, where did you get the two years + that Hermione gained with the time turner? I can\'t see how she could gain more than 21 days in total. For the 1st term she did a maximum of 3 extra hours a day 5 times a week. For the 2nd and 3rd term she did a third less than that as she dropped divination. That equals less than 21 full days. She only used the timeturner to repeat classes, not whole days, not to give her extra time for studying and homework. She didn\'t even get extra time to give her time to get to all her classes before they had already started, sshe always turned up a few minutes late, puffing and panting.
I am now going to enjoy your story, which came highly recommended.
One question though, where did you get the two years + that Hermione gained with the time turner? I can\'t see how she could gain more than 21 days in total. For the 1st term she did a maximum of 3 extra hours a day 5 times a week. For the 2nd and 3rd term she did a third less than that as she dropped divination. That equals less than 21 full days. She only used the timeturner to repeat classes, not whole days, not to give her extra time for studying and homework. She didn\'t even get extra time to give her time to get to all her classes before they had already started, sshe always turned up a few minutes late, puffing and panting.
I am now going to enjoy your story, which came highly recommended.
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May 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I LOVE this chapter as much as the last... (and that is saying something!) Please TRY and update as soon as you can because this is currently my favorite fic consideing my all tome favorite ended rather stupidly!!!
I WANT MORE!
I WANT MORE!
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May 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I always enjoy updates to this story. Again, I enjoyed Hermione taking Albus down a peg or two after his \'Dark Magic\' removal. Her railing leads me to believe that he had the spell cast upon him on purpose, and that he is attempting to have her removed from Severus\' life, so that Severus will not survive the war. After all, a spy who is deceased does not have to be recognized or rewarded, or excised from the legal system. Now Snape has more to live for every day: wife, child, friends, leadership...well, husband to leadership ::giggle:: Mr. Hermione.
I am not certain what it is that Minerva noticed about Hermione so soon. Odd behavior because she was pregnant? That was a little amusing. Also, warning of the curse of breaking the secrecy of the 13. Now, how will Snape convince The DE and Voldemort that he is not a traitor?? By bringing him a lock of hair and letting him riffle through his memories?
Hmmm....I\'m on you FF list, so I will read your next chappie as soon as possible!
And Albus, he really needs to get a grip!! I mean, Hermione basically *graduated* before she got married. Or, did he conveniently forget that was part of the conditions of her joining the Order in the first place?
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I am not certain what it is that Minerva noticed about Hermione so soon. Odd behavior because she was pregnant? That was a little amusing. Also, warning of the curse of breaking the secrecy of the 13. Now, how will Snape convince The DE and Voldemort that he is not a traitor?? By bringing him a lock of hair and letting him riffle through his memories?
Hmmm....I\'m on you FF list, so I will read your next chappie as soon as possible!
And Albus, he really needs to get a grip!! I mean, Hermione basically *graduated* before she got married. Or, did he conveniently forget that was part of the conditions of her joining the Order in the first place?
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May 21, 2005 at 12:00 AM
We\'re gonna have to wait longer for the next update *gasp* i don\'t know if i can wait that long!
LOL! Just update asap please *cheeky grin* cause you know you wanna!
And you will be fine with two fics....you are talented enough to have more....but finish these first hmm!
LOL! Just update asap please *cheeky grin* cause you know you wanna!
And you will be fine with two fics....you are talented enough to have more....but finish these first hmm!
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May 21, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Chapter 16 - Albus is being a right bast.... regarding Severus and Hermione. I just can\'t see what his problem is unless he is jealous or planned to distroy Severus in the end. Guess Albus feels that he won\'t be able to use Severus as a scapegoat if she\'s around. Anyways, keep up the great work and I look forward to your next chapter.