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for Albus's Scheme

by Acadiaelle

person magicmistress
schedule August 19, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I have really enjoyed this story and althought I can see the attraction to change the story to be more in line with HBP, I for one really hope that you do not. Or if you do, that you leave the original up so that it can be enjoyed as well as the edited version of the story. I have enjoyed several of your stories and this one lives up to your excellent level of writing. I liked how you were able to wrap up this story in this last chapter and make it completely believable even if this was not how you had originally intended to end the story. Great job. -- B
person firewall
schedule August 19, 2005 at 12:00 AM
No, no, no! Thank YOU for taking us on your trip! Your story was wonderful and exciting. I\'m looking forward to your next adventure!
person lovehelab
schedule August 19, 2005 at 12:00 AM
BRAVO BRAVO!! I really loved this story. I am glad you finally were able to update and finish it. I hope you start on a new project soon!!
person Koda
schedule August 16, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Oh, I just love this fanfiction. I can\'t wait for the next chapter.
person firewall
schedule August 13, 2005 at 12:00 AM
What a thoroughly intriguing chapter. Thank you for sharing it.
person aviodingyou
schedule July 1, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I love this story I can\'t get enough of it, like SS&HG(HS) can\'t get enough of each other. You are one of the best authors I have read.
person firewall
schedule June 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I\'ve been following this story with interest. You\'ve been manipulating the characters in a most interesting manner. I\'m having a bit of trouble resolving Albus\'s responses but it works with your story.
person Fairy of Fire and Fury
schedule June 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Updates will be slower! SLOWER! I... YOU...how could YOU!

Oh never mind. Just promise you\'ll continue to work and PLEASE update as often as you can. I live for this story (kinda sad life I know but your story is that good). And I think I\'ve already said this but I\'ll say it again:

PLEASE DON\'T KILL HERMIONE OR SEVERUS! Of course with the way Albus is acting her can rot in hell for all I care.

person magicmistress
schedule June 26, 2005 at 12:00 AM
This was a great chapter. I really liked the way that Severus showed and told Hermione that he loves her. Minerva may have put the bug in his ear, but the outcome was all Snape. And truely some things never change. After all of the things that everyone has seen past between Severus and Hermione and how much they obviously care about each other that some people still want to bring them down and pull them apart. It should be enjoyable to see how they get out of this one, and hopefully Minerva will bring Moody down a notch or two. -- B
person angel
schedule June 25, 2005 at 12:00 AM
that was a great chapter i caint wait in till next time ... i fill sorry for hermione and snape a bill should have keep to himself ... well in till next time later

angel