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for Albus's Scheme

by Acadiaelle

person killisandra
schedule August 25, 2005 at 12:00 AM
That was absolutely fucking brilliant. Loved it! Sorry, I haven\'t come back to this story in a while and was so happy to find it had an ending. It was fantastic. I hope you continue writing.
Blessed Be,
~Sandra~
person Jo
schedule August 24, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I have enjoyed reading your story, thanks very much
person mya
schedule August 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Wow, I don\'t even know where to begin. This story was twisted, stranger, amazing, touching, and overall great. I spent the last day reading it completely through (gotta love having a day off to do absolutely nothing). I couldn\'t \"put it down\" (or shut it off I guess) I hope you continue to write stories as great as this. ~*~mya~*~
person DawnEB
schedule August 20, 2005 at 12:00 AM
When I started reading this, I was worried it might start rambling, or get too fluffy, but that didn\'t happen. For all of it taking a different course to the one you intended, you kept it in line and I have throughly enjoyed it.
person angel
schedule August 20, 2005 at 12:00 AM
i love how you ended the story and i just love the story and i cant wait in till you make a new story ....i would love to read you are a every every good author and you show keep up with the good wor and in till next time later

angel
person Koda
schedule August 20, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Ohoeznoez, it\'s over. ;_;
Great ending. But poor Voldemort, I <3 him.
I sound really weird saying that.
OHWELL. Thanks for writing this, it was a great \'long, strange trip.\'
<333 Bai.
person shiv5468
schedule August 20, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I have enjoyed reading your story. I thought that the romance between Severus and Hermione was a little quick moving at first, but we all know they are meant to be don\'t we? ;-) I did like your take on Albus - that the spell only enhanced his innate opinions and attitudes, because I\'ve always thought that the truth of his character lay much closer to the one you\'ve written than the twinkly eyed chap we see in most stories.

Thanks for writing.
person Kathryn
schedule August 20, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Loved the story!

person JTBJAB
schedule August 20, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Wow, an amazing ending....are you going to do a sequel?

Thank you for writing this, I have enjoyed it, and the pleasure it gave me!

Well done, and I look forward to any other SS/HG that you write in the future - please do!
person Medea
schedule August 20, 2005 at 12:00 AM
*sigh* wonderful... just wonderful, thank you for letting us take the journey with you.