rate_review Reviews

loved the story so far although I am curious about the beta job. I\'ve never been an editor but I\'m a big fan of fan fiction, if you don\'t mind someone new I\'d be willing to try. Oh question! If snape is a vamp, where does he get his blood during the school year? Does the DADA techer get to use him as an example during class (joking) Is his favorite candy blood pops? and finally does he have to turn harry in order to mate with him?

hi hi well i am likin the story lots, yeah for rebellious potter fics not to mention snape as a vampire that could get interesting! I think ur doing great!

If you still need a beta I would be more then happy to

LICK MY BUTT!!!! Thats a pretty good start keep it up! Fuck yea!

Hi Kat Potter,

I\'ve never Betaed before so I don\'t have any credentials, but I can spell and my grammar isn\'t bad. Sorry, I don\'t know how to do italics, but I\'m resourceful and can find out.

I love this story and your writing is quite easy to read. I don\'t usually read the vamp stories, but this one intriques me. I love the \'new Harry\' and finally, Severus taking that big leap of faith (do Vampires have faith?) to get to Harry. AH, Love! I know it\'ll be a hard fought war, between them, nevermind with Voldemort.

I\'m usually a no-nonsense type of person, and so will tell you quite outright when things don\'t flow/go together/or when I don\'t get it. As I said, I\'m resourceful, being an older mom does that to you and I won\'t bail on you for the duration of this story. I make that commitment now to both you and your readers.

Please let me know, because I want to see the third chapter up and running.

Thanks.

Uhhh.....I\'m not positively sure what a beta is, but if you\'re talking about a spell-checker, I can do that, if you like. I\'m a living dictionary and my friend Ashley draws Manga and comics like that so I\'m always spell-checking her work. And I really like your story so far. Very interesting. Hope you update soon. ^.^

Hi, I love your story. I love what you\'ve done with Harry\'s character. And a vamp Sev sounds just right. If you\'re still looking for a beta, I\'d be more than happy to help you out. I signed myself up on a few sites as a beta. Write to above address if you\'d like me to beta for you. Looking forward to reading more.

hey,
i have never beta\'ed before, however i am willing to offer my help if you have not
found someone else already. i have really enjoyed the first two chapters of your
story and am anxious for it to continue.
here if you need me,
LPhoenix

More...noW!
I mean it!
I want to read more!
WAAAAH!
UPDATE

update soon.... this story is going to be soooo good... i can tell... please update soon...