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for And It Hits The Fan

by kat701

person Karen
schedule July 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Ohh.. I am liking it immensely. Very nice and I am hungering for more. Can\'t wait for the next chapter. Very good, lovely, and fantastic. =D
Go Snarry. -pompoms-
person momoko
schedule July 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
good chapter
person Katharos
schedule July 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I\'m sorry that you had writer\'s block, but the chapter wasn\'t too bad and you\'re right, it needed it. I can\'t wait to read the next chapter! I hope you have better luck with the writing, this time.
person harryhollow
schedule July 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
please e-mail me whenever you update!!
person Hambares
schedule July 26, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I\'m so glad chapter three is almost ready! Yippy! Can\'t wait!
person victoria parra
schedule July 5, 2005 at 12:00 AM
i love your stories no matter what people say
person lacquer
schedule June 16, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Question that has been bugging me...

When will you update? It has really been quite a while since you posted this story on this site and I think on silversnitch or forever fandom. Please update.. Love vamp stories....
person sethian
schedule June 14, 2005 at 12:00 AM
nice ! I love it, update soon :)
person shadow
schedule June 14, 2005 at 12:00 AM
heheh, I like severus as a vampire. it\'s cool. heheh keep it up. it\'s pretty good so far.
person REadER
schedule June 12, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Hiya! I really like your story. Ummm... I think the lip ring is cool, it could be used some way in a really heated kiss. I think you should make Harry look a little bad boy, but not too much. Like he starts wearing tight clothes, shirt, leather pants, etc. I\'m a little confused with his glamour, blonde hair, blue eyes, why did he need to change his looks? I think you should describe what he really looks like. I think long hair would do good for him. When he gets back to school, all the girls and guys would be really attracted to him, even Malfoy and Slytherin people. And Snape would have a really hard time controlling his lust and need to be with his mate. And every now and then he would get jealous. And Harry would keep getting his \"dreams\" and get attracted to Snape a lot, and start flirting with him. Then, when they\'re alone---detention, middle of the night, etc.---they could start getting passionate with each other. Oh yeah, it would be really hot if Snape actually looked younger like around his twentys and that he used a glamour to make himself look old. And Harry can see through the illusion cause they\'re mates and Harry just thinks hes irrisistable(spell?). Well thats all I got to say ^.^ Can\'t wait for the next chapters.