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for And It Hits The Fan

by kat701

person ice owl
schedule August 4, 2005 at 12:00 AM
well then, Harry really has taken to being mature there! I really like the way he has turned into a materialistic git! Go Harry!!!
person Newtype
schedule August 4, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Wooo that was quite a cliff your trying to throw me off, can we please get more hu? I like it, just don\'t like the one chapter addings, its driving me nutso
person Bunny
schedule August 3, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Alright, Im gona be kinda rude here. This is a really good story but, YOU NEED TO FUCKING UPDATE!!!! You\'ve gotten three chapters out in the span of A FUCKING YEAR!!!! Either update or fucking give the story to someone else. You have all these damn warnings and shit and then there hasen\'t been anything happen between harry and snape FOR A FUCKING YEAR!!!!!!!! If you can\'t finish the damn story fucking give it to me and I\'ll bloody finish it!!! Or give it to someones else! I know writers block sucks, but you\'ve gotten only three crummy chapters, in which not even fluff happens between them, out in the span of a damn year! Heres a damn idea. Have snape barge into harry\'s inn room, slam him against the wall and start demanding answers!!! Then get all huffy and have a hissy fit and fucking kiss harry! good gods girl!
person Newtype
schedule August 3, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Quit with the orderves and lets get to the main event, can we please get more then on chapter at a time, not that I don\'t like the stroy, becaues I love it, Vamp Snape is one of my faves
person deb
schedule August 2, 2005 at 12:00 AM
It\'s actually updated wow i hope you do it regulary from now on its going to be way cool. he likes snape he-he whooo already only coz there mates i cant wait till harry get biten by snape i love vampire harry hope it hurts at least a bit when snape bites him the ok afterwards like ! update soon
person antipyro
schedule August 2, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Oh, thank you soooo much for updating this fic. I really like the fics where Harry is AU and strikes out on his own. The piercings, tattoo and punk stuff was a bonus.

O.k., you gotta explain Erus and its meaning. It sounds almost erotic.

Love the port-key animal cages - very clever. It should be allowed for take-out food and renting dvds/videos, etc.

Love the book titles - A Parselmouth\'s Guide to Snakes - HA! You could go on and get the next book in the \"How To\" series, \'When you\'re not communicating with your snake\' or even \'A Dictionary of Parselmouth Terms\'. That last one is for Dummies. HA, HA, HA. (If you\'re so inclined, you may use these with permission.)

...\"old Tommy-boy and his stupid Grim Reaper Munchers\" - I laughed so hard when I read this I almost spit up my drink! Another question: Why does Harry want Auror Robes? You\'d think they were only given out by the Ministry to qualified Aurors, kinda like a policeman\'s uniform. If Harry wears one, someone will think he\'s an Auror and possibly attack him as one. A little stupid if you ask me, but hey, it\'s your fic, it may turn out o.k.

How long/big is the snake? Is it full grown or still a snakeling? How long can it get? Seeing how it can wrap itself around Harry\'s chest, it must be a fair size, but it\'s magical, so......????

You never mentioned that Harry had put on Glamours, just a bandana. Was it implied?

Sorry to be a pain-in-the-butt, but I really want to see this fic continue and I thank you that it will be a long one.

Some authors will ask for Muse inspiration from their readers - I give you many chocolate cookies, or whatever your fav\'s are to create magical endorphins to create more story. Post soon.

person Gwen
schedule July 29, 2005 at 12:00 AM
That is a realy good story so far, i hope you update soon.

Oh and Harry needs a niple ring!!!
person amanda
schedule July 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
great chapter update soon
person victoria megan parra
schedule July 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
you put alot of work into this story it rocks and its about time harry fights back and as i said before a vampire snape totaly kinky my kind of style
person Missi
schedule July 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
This fic is pretty cool! I can\'t wait for more!