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for And It Hits The Fan

by kat701

person monkey
schedule December 26, 2004 at 12:00 AM
more!!! more!!! I want to see how snape plans to get harry. it\'s very interesting so far.
person BloodRedLove
schedule December 25, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Cute story so far. I\'ll be checking back on it.
person Yana
schedule December 24, 2004 at 12:00 AM
yeh harry what have you done
that looks ugly
person Shaddow
schedule December 24, 2004 at 12:00 AM
DAMN!! Did you HAVE to have Harry get a lip peircing? YUCK!! MORE PLEASE
person Ree
schedule December 23, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Cool story, and I can beta it if you want . . .
person Firecrest
schedule December 23, 2004 at 12:00 AM
More! More! More!! Please!
person Yana
schedule December 22, 2004 at 12:00 AM
please don\'t make Harry fall out with his friends
person Shaddow
schedule December 22, 2004 at 12:00 AM
MORE GODDAMNIT MORE!!!! This is WAY to Brilliant a story to stop now!!!!!! MORE, I Command you my slave MORE!!!! *goes off into psychotic laughter*
person Addict(too lazy to sign in)
schedule December 22, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Oh but this promices to be GREAT! Please do write more and update soon? I\'ll be forver happy if you do!

Never stop writing,

Aden
person manx
schedule December 22, 2004 at 12:00 AM
The beginning was too confusing, as you jumped around from what he was thinking to being a prisoner and made it sound as if he was \"fed up\" while captured. How did he get rescued? Or did he escape?