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for A Whiskey Lullabye

by kat701

person OldLoves
schedule November 3, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I hate that song. But, I\'ll give you a pat on the back for actaully making a pretty good fic out of it. You almost made me feel a bit of sorrow there for a moment. But no tears... You will have to try a lot harder if you expect to really touch someone with your writings. Give me an e-mail if you are interested in learning a few things. I don\'t usually do this, but I see the quite a bit of talent in you.

Get back at me,

Morgane

ps: This is a one-time offer. If I don\'t recieve any messages from you in one week, next Thursday, the offer will expire. Hope to hear from you soon.
person malynn
schedule August 3, 2005 at 12:00 AM
omg im cryin!!!!it was sooo good!i lso know tht song nd it just...i loved it!
person Gabri
schedule June 2, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Ahhh, don\'t feel blue luv. It\'s a great story! I wouldn\'t mind some more from you. :D

schedule June 2, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I\'m interested.
This is actually quite intriguing.

A little bit of advice, don\'t ask others if you should write, just write.
I should know this because people have told me not to write but I do anyways.
Having 300 people look at it and having 3 reviews is great.
I have a story with 6000 views and 60 reviews.
1 review every 100 views.
Not a bad ratio considering some of the people who looked at it could flame it if they chose.
Write because you want to write, I\'ll read it, promise!
I look forward to the updates here, even if it doesn\'t promise to be a happy ending.

Hope I didn\'t disturb you or anything. This story looks promising and you have a lot of talent.
All that\'s left is for you to use it.
Here\'s to review number...4?
person thrnbrooke
schedule June 1, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Wanna prequel!!!!!!!!
person thrnbrooke
schedule April 7, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Oh this broke my heart! Please do a prequel!
person lina
schedule April 7, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Well, I can explain why they aren\'t any reviews. One: some people are stupid. Two: some people don\'t know what a true story is. Three: some people don\'t know how to review (my case long time ago). Four: some people are just to lazy to do reviews (my case very long long long time ago). So there, don\'t let it get to you if you don\'t have reviews because I will tell you a secret....I LOVE YOUR STORY. There, I have said it, now I most go. See you later!

PD: I LOVE YOUR STORY...ups! I already told you that, right? ^_^!
person kitsunechibiko
schedule April 5, 2005 at 12:00 AM
no prequil, but your story is awsome!
person Reba Williams
schedule April 5, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I say do a prequel, it\'s a great story....
person LiFeABItCh
schedule April 4, 2005 at 12:00 AM
do a prequel.it was a good story.