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i can honostly see harry actually playing up to someone, it just seems natural, that two of the most exciting guys in school, try to do this with two quiet types that know what they want, but yet they don\'t.

i really like all the interplay between the characters. it\'s fun to watch them scheme or plan or whatever it is they\'re doing. i was thrown for a loop when harry, ron and hermione entered that train car and began talking to daphne. from the second chapter i thought harry had feelings for hermione and now he\'s head over heels for daphne. and hermione was helping him. it was confusing and rather sudden. i did however like the flirting that went on.

Intressting story on many diffrent levels.
Especialy since Harry seams to take the \"total honesty\" aproach, while draco is lieing trough his teeth.
I wounder who will \"win\", or if DG will figure out the gameplan ( i think she would, but forgive Harry once he explains in detail ).

interesting story so far. i like the fact that harry does in fact have feelings
for hermione, and i for one are hoping they are extend past friendship.
I\'m aware you are posting this on AFF, which seems to draw in far too
many smutty stories (for my liking, anyway). i\'m hoping you maintain the
plotline, and make it more interesting than a H/B D/H snog-fest. chapter
2 has given me hope! update soon, and keep up the good plotline

Really looking forward to what happens next.

This would be much better if you had a beta reader proofread for you. The errors (e.g., distrain{disdain}, die{died} of towards{off towards}) are kind of distracting. Also, there is a VERY popular story in HP fanfiction that already has this title - it is posted on Whispers. You might want to think about changing yours, at least a bit.

i really liked the second chapter. the first, because of the way it was setup didn\'t draw me in very well, but the second... i\'m hooked. the way draco played hermione, the way harry angsted over draco playing hermione, and the way snape sneered at harry\'s reaction to draco playing hermione were all so well written. there is only one point that rings false from me. when snape says hermione needs support from someone, why does he think she would believe it was coming from him? hermione doesn\'t like snape any more then harry and ron. oh yeah, one more thing, Adopt a Slytherin Society, or ASS, is brilliant. it is to laugh!

I really like this story! It\'s realistic and I can\'t wait for the smut that will ensue. Please update soon!

thank you for clearing my confusion. i really like stories that have draco as a bastard, that goes for the mud blood, and likes it. i know i\'m sick, but i just can\'t help it. can\'t wait to read more.

I already love this story. I also loved Snape\'s speech to Harry when he told him about the bet. I\'m still expecting Hermione to be suspicious of Draco\'s actions, but I\'m really looking forward to seeing Draco fall in love with her and vise versa. Let the games begin!