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for The Objects of Desire

by Halric

person dragon34
schedule January 10, 2005 at 12:00 AM
As it is I hope Harry wins, but something else inside wants Draco to win. I know it\'s wrong,but if it\'s the only way Draco actually gets to feel something for someone, then so let it be. Maybe you could throw Ron a date or two too. I like it, can\'t wait for another chapter.

jeannette
person Anon
schedule January 10, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I really like this story--it\'s nice to have a real story and a plot, not just random sexual interactions. Keep up the good work!
person HaryPoter
schedule January 9, 2005 at 12:00 AM
The story\'s starting out awfully slow ... you might want to think about getting to some smut soon
person Halric
schedule January 3, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Thanks erg.. it\'s been changed
person hermionebrowneyes
schedule January 3, 2005 at 12:00 AM
hi ive bin reading your story it quite good i cant wait to see the next chap its good to see a good story like yours
person Hanna Delacour
schedule January 2, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Loving it! Was that a intentional or unintentional Darth Vader quote in chapter 2? If it was intentional I love you forever! If it was unintentional at least I know you have a great mind :D Can\'t wait for the next great chapter or 20 of this brilliant fic! Please update again soon!
person erg...
schedule January 2, 2005 at 12:00 AM
3) Every effort will be made to clear the OOD\'s schedule on the night of an engagement, DM/HG Mon, Wed, & Fri, HP/BZ Tue, Thur, Fri. Weekends are open house.
third rule
person amniarix
schedule January 1, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Miss Granger, Mr. Malfoy is a hormonal teenager and you are a very attractive young woman, you could have him eating out of your hands if you play him right.\"

I can\'t wait to see how you have Master Malfoy eating out of Miss Grangers so attractive hand! . And the dialogue between Harry and his slytherin girlfriend was great in the 3rd chapter. I love how you are referring back to canon to get the interaction between your characters right, that more than anything else is helping this fic to have a balanced feel. Can\'t wait for more...
person slingy
schedule January 1, 2005 at 12:00 AM
cool story. it actually has a plot. thats something u dont see very often here :D
keep up the good work and update soon :D
person harypoter
schedule January 1, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I can just feel the sexual tension building; great start!