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November 29, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?
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July 31, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Yay! Great story, I love it. I can\'t wait for future updates!!! ^_^
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July 30, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I\'ve only read the first chapter so far, but I think you have a good premise. I think you should take care not to run your sentences in, because it creates confusion on the reader. All in all, even if you didn\'t add much sexual overtones, I like your beginning. And oh, I don\'t think Dumbledore speaks that way.
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July 30, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I had to go back and re-read your previous chapters, but it was worth it. I want to hit Draco over the head too. Excellent, but one small note, sometimes you use OF instead of HAVE. OF is not a verb. Sorry, little things can sometimes distract from the quality of your writing.
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July 30, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Hermoine took advantage of a guy with amnesia! Update soon please. :)
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July 30, 2005 at 12:00 AM
keep up the good work. I love your story!
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January 24, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Ok... i got confused because it posted twice... i jsut hope SOMETHING more happens with Draco and Hermione soon!!! Update soon!
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January 18, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Could you please email me when you update this story? I love the tension between Draco and Hermione. They are my favorite HP characters.
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January 18, 2005 at 12:00 AM
incase you hadn\'t noticed, you posted chapter 3 twice
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January 18, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I really liked your story, but it could use a lot more smut. in one of your chapters you repeated yourself, with the other chapters, but besides that it was great.
jeannette
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