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for Burning Eyes

by gammiepie

person sam
schedule May 30, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Would love to see more before i can get a grip on the story and review it properly. its an interesting twist your taking, an untrodden path so to speek so should make for an interesting story. please continue!!
person Blackheart
schedule May 9, 2005 at 12:00 AM
You don\'t just start a story like that and stop HELLO!!!!! who cares if some one reviews ... even though ... I... am. Any way its a totally captivating story you should definastely contine




NOW GET UP AND WRITE NOW NOW NOW NOW.............PLEEEEEEEEEEASE!!!!!!:-(
person Bambu
schedule December 22, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Very, very clever hook. Hermione knows her prey quite well, baited her hook beautifully... and damned if he didn\'t bite! It will be lovely to see what you do with this.
person Zephyr
schedule December 19, 2004 at 12:00 AM
That is great I can\'t wait for the next chapter.. Your stories are always awesome!

Z~
person Fiery Slut
schedule December 19, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I usually prefer Draco as the vampire in D/Hr fics but I just love the way you portray Vamp!Hermione
person jenn
schedule December 19, 2004 at 12:00 AM
there is certainly promise. :) i dig vampire!hermione.

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