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March 1, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Great story.
Would've love a couple of sequels though; first one dealing with Harry/Erin & Draco/Alana after Erin's rescue -- and then one dealing with their oldest children at Hogwarts, falling in love and marrying.
Would've love a couple of sequels though; first one dealing with Harry/Erin & Draco/Alana after Erin's rescue -- and then one dealing with their oldest children at Hogwarts, falling in love and marrying.
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November 16, 2005 at 12:00 AM
up date
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October 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
keep going this story rules
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July 20, 2005 at 12:00 AM
this fic is one of the best I have read for so long it has me on the edge more chapters please
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April 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Eh, well straight H/girl fiction that\'s reasonably readable is rare enough these days so good work on that. Your content leaves something to be desired though at least from my point of view. It\'s disconcerting really how...ah freely the female main character seems to couple from both of your major works. It seems like brianna and now erin are looking to be raped, which needless to say degenerate your work into run-of-the-mill woman \"shag anything that moves fic.\" If this WAS what you were going for...*shrugs* then fine, your story. But until ch15-16 in this story, it didn\'t feel like all those other shag her silly stories, so I\'m just warning you.
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April 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Brilliant FF, I can\'t wait to see what happens when the pair finally comes back together again. It\'s going to be so beautiful. Anyways, I always read, but can\'t always leave a review. I often times read from a sidekick (you know that little device that Snoop Dogg advertises \"Everybody needs a sidekick\"), while handy to read basic net on, it doesn\'t leave the option available for me to review.
I have read your other stories and find your work brilliant.
Can\'t wait to read more!
Love, Hugs and Bludgers,
Trix ^_^
I have read your other stories and find your work brilliant.
Can\'t wait to read more!
Love, Hugs and Bludgers,
Trix ^_^
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April 21, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I really like the story, but don\'t seem to understand how Erin can so readily accept any sort of advance from Lucius. Even being pleasant has its bounds. And the bit in the last chapter where she is horny just because some is touching her belittles the soul-binding that you have implied - if you know what i mean.
Keep up the great work though as these complaints are only minor in comparison to the rest of the story.
Keep up the great work though as these complaints are only minor in comparison to the rest of the story.
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April 15, 2005 at 12:00 AM
absolutely amazing story!! you HAVE to continue soon, im addicted.
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March 11, 2005 at 12:00 AM
email me when you update!
AUGH! cliffies suck.
AUGH! cliffies suck.
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January 11, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Oh dear, I think Erin ought to have finished him off! Great chapter, got a feeling though
dear brother\'s going to be back.
Loved it, update soon please.
dear brother\'s going to be back.
Loved it, update soon please.