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December 19, 2004 at 12:00 AM
amazingly captivating, I have to know wha caused all this to transpire!!!! Snape and harry married and bonded all in hatered and now slowely dying, ohhh how excrusiatingly sad...but what a delicious plot!!! oh i HAVE to know how this playes out! please write more and update soon!
Never stop writing,
Aden
Never stop writing,
Aden
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December 18, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I\'m hooked. At first I was a little bit confused in regard to the characters\' identities, but once that issue was solved it was an absolute pleasure to read. What I like most is how unrelenting Harry is in his fury and hatred. It not only suits him but is very believable too.
Please update soon!
Please update soon!
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December 17, 2004 at 12:00 AM
An excellent start. Is there going to be flashback showing us those three years of marriage? I like that they didn\'t simpyl fall in love iwth each other as they do in so many fics; this is much more realistic. Post soon
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December 16, 2004 at 12:00 AM
It\'s good. I hope you update quickly.
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December 16, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I like this story. It has the potential to be very good. Though I do suggest that you get a beta since I noticed some misspelled words and such.
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December 16, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I must admit, the chap. was good, eventhough I\'m not one for dark/angsty stories as I find them melodramatic. I hope this becomes more positive as I am a sicker for a good Harry/Sev, and this seems like it might be one. Also, good touch with Dumbledore, I hate it when they forgive him, he\'s a bastard. Update soon please, and please make it happy, please?