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Okay, had to reread and caught your author\'s notes. As for book 6, well... I for one didn\'t want Snape to be a true villain. Nowadays fanfiction is the only way I get to see Snape be what I had hoped he\'d be. Let YOUR Snape inspire you. He\'s quite interesting. ;D

I would expect Harry to be quite pissed off at Snape for what he did in the tower, as much as that seems to be all Harry ever wanted to begin with. (and it looks like a desperate Snape thinks the only way he would get that chance was by force) Seems to me that Snape has quite some making up to do, and I\'d love to hear the explaination on why he had held back from Harry before, essentially driving him away. It\'s quite sad that the tower rape was Harry \'s first and only experience with Snape actually \'GIVING\' to him. The only flashbacks that seem necessary would be the ones that illustrate the difference between what they had before and what Snape would give to him now that he\'s had some years to kick himself over his foolish choices. You showed us quite a bit of the backstory with a few well written sentences, so maybe long exposition into backstory would be ill advised. But I\'m sure if you choose to do it, it would be interesting. Speaking of... you write wonderfully. The emotions are clear and you don\'t seem to be changing your characters randomly to suit the end of your story. That\'s my pet peeve, and you were wise enough to give some room for your plot to do whatever you want. You should get a beta, though. It would help with just the technical bits and with fewer mistakes your story would be a perfect read!

kick ass, so they do have some feelings for each other. Or at least snape has feelings for Harry. Small feelings at least, calling him by his first name and all. I wonder if Harry will be angry when he wakes up?

I remember reading this, it\'s been a long time. I\'m glad you haven\'t abandoned it. I\'d love to find out how it ends. Please continue.

You need to update PLEASE!!!!!! I love the story now all you need to do is finish it. Please, please, PLEASE!!!!!!!!

I love your story so much. I am an angst addict. ^_^ So all this dark drama stuff really draws me in. I am glad it will get happier though. As much as I love angst I prefer endings that are of a happier nature.

Man Harry seems to have anger management problems. ^_^! I don\'t mind though. I like seeing him in a different light. He has been hurt and betrayed. It is nice to read a story were Harry is not so submissive to a hard fate but instead rebels and fights against it. I was glad they cleaned the smoke out of his lungs. When I figured out it was him smoking I was like noooooo. @_@ Now it just represents this path of self destruction he seems to have chosen for himself. Ron\'s death made me a little sad but it adds into Harry\'s pain and also gives you a glimpse of Harry\'s history with Snape and how lonely Harry must have felt with him. Man does he ever have something against Albus. @_@! Can\'t blame him but now I feel sorry for Albus. I guess that is what he gets for being so manipulative.

I really love your writing style. Your descriptions are extremely beautiful and creative. I can\'t wait to read more. I want to see how Harry and Snape react to each other and learn more about this dark past of theirs.

Please update soon!!!

Will you be updating this story??

A North American, huh? You might want to get someone british to beta your stories for you.

please please please continue! I\'m sort of confused so far, but I imagine it will become clear as the story continues. Please keep writing.... do you have a mailing list for updates?

love the story. Please update as soon as possible

it\'s so agnsty!!!! and so far it\'s great!!!! please keep continue this story!!!