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January 1, 2007 at 12:00 AM
It's a pity your muse went away on this story. You've got an intriguing beginning, and I would love to find out what happens next, and if they can manage to actually reach a happily-ever-after. I hope your muse and schedule will allow you to come back to this story someday. Zafaran zafaran@fastmail.fm
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November 16, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Hey, interesting plot and a very well written story!!! I like the way harry left them all behind and how defiant he is!!! It suits his charakter. I think, if he is truly as strong as he should be and with the history of the two, that this is the right way for the plot and I hope harry continues to fight against this manipulations!!! If he hates snape so much, perhaps he would prefer death over the life with snape. The question is if they can convince him, that this would not be the right thing to do. I would rella like to read more!!! So update soon!!!
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November 8, 2005 at 12:00 AM
HOT!!!!! please update soon this is amazing, good work
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October 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I love it! I can\'t wait to see what happens!
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October 19, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Great chapter! I\'m glad I read this.
I love the continued hatred in the Harry/Snape relationship, and I LOVE that Snape is unyielding about being the top. He wants the relationship with Harry, but he also demands it be on his terms. Fantastic.
Very, very hot scene. Wonder how angry Harry\'s going to be when he\'s himself again?
Flashback scenes-- well, we certainly can see their first night. How did Harry get embroiled in this? Was he physically forced, coerced? How did he react immediately afterwards?
I love embittered Harry.
And ITA aobut Half-Blood Prince.
I love the continued hatred in the Harry/Snape relationship, and I LOVE that Snape is unyielding about being the top. He wants the relationship with Harry, but he also demands it be on his terms. Fantastic.
Very, very hot scene. Wonder how angry Harry\'s going to be when he\'s himself again?
Flashback scenes-- well, we certainly can see their first night. How did Harry get embroiled in this? Was he physically forced, coerced? How did he react immediately afterwards?
I love embittered Harry.
And ITA aobut Half-Blood Prince.
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October 18, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I really love your story, and I sincerely hope you\'re going to continue it seeing it has lots of potential. I hope Severus and Harry will start a new relationship on new basis. :) they always make a good couple in the end don\'t they ^.^
Sethian
Sethian
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October 17, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I really like this story! It\'s well written, except i noticed a lot of words were in the wrong tense and stuff like that.
But otherwise i really like it and hope you update soon! Poor Sev! Harry can\'t see that he wants him! And yet if Sev wasn\'t so stubborn about being dominant then meybe he could.... well i like it and i want to read more! SOON! PLZ ;P
But otherwise i really like it and hope you update soon! Poor Sev! Harry can\'t see that he wants him! And yet if Sev wasn\'t so stubborn about being dominant then meybe he could.... well i like it and i want to read more! SOON! PLZ ;P
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October 17, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Please write more!
(but It is not called organisms, but orgasms.... ;-)
(but It is not called organisms, but orgasms.... ;-)
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October 16, 2005 at 12:00 AM
the beatle black eyes (The Beatles were British singers back in the 60s. \"Beetle\" is an insect, often black.)
Severus
Severus
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October 16, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I\'m so glad you finally updated. I was scared you would not keep writing and I really love what you have so far. I want to molest this new chapter!!! I really like seeing a stubborn and angry Harry. I don\'t read many fics where he is like that and it is really refreshing. I really like how dominate you have made Snape. I\'m so happy you have already added the sex. I was very interested to see it in this fic. I\'m becoming addicted to Harry being so suborn and adding that to the sex made it so hot. I really loved that sex scene!!! I loved how forceful Snape was and yet he seemed more interested in Harry\'s pleasure than his own. I have to wonder though. Harry does not seem like he liked the sex a lot during their marriage. I guess I\'m wondering how Snape was able to get Harry to touch him and even suck him if Harry thought of the sex as a duty. Also I kind of see oral sex as more of a dominate than submissive thing. At least in gay sex. The one giving the oral sex seems to me the one in control. But maybe I just liking seeing dominates more concerned with the pleasure of their submissives.
I\'m loving the sex so far and if you do flash backs I would love for you to make a few of them ones that involved their sex in the past. Maybe their first time together or times that really had an effect on Harry or Snape. I don\'t really want to see this turn into a sappy fic either but I don\'t think the last chapter was really becoming that way. I liked seeing Snape caring for Harry as long as he stays in character for the most part. As for what else to write about, well I\'m never good with that kind of thing. I love seeing Harry fighting against it so I don\'t want to see him give into anything easily and I really want to see more sex between them. I can\'t wait to find out Harry\'s reaction when he wakes up. It might be interesting to see Harry try to run away again from Snape. I have always loved chases.
Please try and update sooner this time!!!!
I\'m loving the sex so far and if you do flash backs I would love for you to make a few of them ones that involved their sex in the past. Maybe their first time together or times that really had an effect on Harry or Snape. I don\'t really want to see this turn into a sappy fic either but I don\'t think the last chapter was really becoming that way. I liked seeing Snape caring for Harry as long as he stays in character for the most part. As for what else to write about, well I\'m never good with that kind of thing. I love seeing Harry fighting against it so I don\'t want to see him give into anything easily and I really want to see more sex between them. I can\'t wait to find out Harry\'s reaction when he wakes up. It might be interesting to see Harry try to run away again from Snape. I have always loved chases.
Please try and update sooner this time!!!!