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for Losing The Game

by merrykittie

person Priss368
schedule December 23, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I\'m very happy you updated! I think this fic has an overall dark slant to it, but will have it\'s happy/fluffy moments for our boys (they\'re so sweet). That Lucius is going to get himself into big trouble when he tries to \"talk\" to Draco! He should know better since he is part of one of the bonds you listed! As for those bonds, that you differentiated the multiple bonds was really well done. I wonder which one D & H have? Heh Heh! I take it Ron & Hermoine were present when D & H were uncovered-naked & obviously post coital? There\'s so much more I could say about this fic! Please keep it up! Great fic! Priss
person Diabloangel
schedule December 23, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I like very much. Please continue. I want to see how this affects the rest of their lives and interactions.
person caz
schedule December 20, 2004 at 12:00 AM
so so so so good! more more more!!! *worships*
person Priss368
schedule December 16, 2004 at 12:00 AM
You have the beginning of a great story if you continue! I thought you gave more depth to Draco that makes him more realistic. There aren\'t many teens that idolize their parents blindly like he does in other stories. As for the way Harry & Draco\'s magic reacted to each other, it does sound like they are bonded after this. Why? Probably because subconciously they were attracted to each other & their magic decided it was time for this to come out. I wonder what everyone\'s reaction is going to be to the collapse of the lockers & other destruction that happened as a result of the bonding? It would be interesting to read of everyone\'s reaction as well to when they uncover Harry & Draco. (It\'ll be obvious what they\'ve been doing) Well, I hope you do continue! Priss
person thrnbrooke
schedule December 16, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Holy moly! What happened? Why did Draco\'s magic flow into Harry? How is that possible? What happens now?
person sak
schedule December 15, 2004 at 12:00 AM
You cannot just leave it like that--their power demolishing the locker rooms and damaging glass. I\'d like to know why their power transferred and built. Was there no way to stop it? Are they bonded in any way because of this? So many questions!