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for Losing The Game

by merrykittie

person Priss368
schedule January 18, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Hey, your fic is worth waiting for! I love the dynamics of Harry & Draco. I wonder though who is the traitor in Gryffindor? If Snape has them in class, he may be able to work out who it is since he also recognized the voice. Priss
person Shame Ness
schedule January 18, 2005 at 12:00 AM
It was great i love it so much!! write some more, real soon-like and the gods shall worship you!!!

(dont you wish)

Aj
person Fefs
schedule January 18, 2005 at 12:00 AM
It may be hard work to write slash but you\'ve donne perfectly well! Wow.. this bond ritual.. what can i say: Congrats! I\'m drowling here... can\'t wait for the next chap! Oh, i forgot to say: This fic is amazing!! =P
Hugs
person Reyn
schedule January 18, 2005 at 12:00 AM
YaY! You updated! YaY! We got some action! LoL.

I know what you mean about trying to find the right words without turning the scene into some cheesy porno. But you did good! ^_^ Keep it up!
person thrnbrooke
schedule January 16, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Oh I can\'t wait until chapter 9! I\'m sooo glad Harry read that book and that Draco is safe! Oh I worry about Severus. I hope Voldemort doesn\'t kill him! I hope Lucius is able to get him out. Lucius is a spy isn\'t he? Can\'t wait for more!
person Remi
schedule January 13, 2005 at 12:00 AM
i cant wait for more more more!!!!! will it be soon? i hope!
person Dadella
schedule January 12, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Great stuff...
I loved that last chapter *with Voldy* it was really well done...
and TOTALLY believable!!

That piece of jewelery was SO something Rowling would\'ve done!

great job!

and I can really feel the sadness with Snape going to get tortured, as it were...

and ... that bit about Malfoy\'s father being a spy was a touch confusing... I couldn\'t really find any reference to it before that made sense... so...

*heh*

great job, really loving this story
person Ava
schedule January 11, 2005 at 12:00 AM
This story\'s awesome!! I absolutely LOVE it!! Its really hard to find an original plot on the net these days, but your story is really unique. I think you\'re really talented and i hope you update soon.

Bear hugs and eskimo kisses,
Ava.
person gact
schedule January 11, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Cool, idea, very excellent writing I can\'t wait for more.
*Just as long as neither end up pregnant I\'ll keep reading*
person Che
schedule January 11, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Ah! I need more! :: Pleadbegwhinewhimper:: Pleeeease?