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for The Homerun Blues

by Padfoot

person Kiki Malfoy
schedule December 18, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I would just like to say this is a lovely story. I like the wholepotion idea. Very imaginative and also very humorous. Keep up the good work!
person Jay
schedule December 18, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Wow great chapter. Written nicely. I cant write like that so kudos. I look forward to everyday to read your updates! Cant wait for tomorrow!
person lala
schedule December 17, 2004 at 12:00 AM
that was hilarious!!!!! omg!! haha the lightening bolt..that would have been scarring.!!
person Mercika
schedule December 17, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Lust? Hmmm ... lust ..... I AM LUSTING FOR ANOTHER CHAPTER!!! I love you\'re stories so much, and will be following every single chapter with a review. I\'ve read basically all of youre stories and found that every single one of them are great! You\'re such a talented writer, and i\'ll be waiting patiently for the next chapter!
~ Mercika
person Yawning (not logged in)
schedule December 17, 2004 at 12:00 AM
*Mouth hanging open in awe* Oh my God!!!!! This is so hilarious and sexy as hell. I\'m highly impressed. I have to add this to my favorites list.
person Excel
schedule December 17, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Oh, I love this plot! Draco and Hermione have never been hotter.
person nosie
schedule December 17, 2004 at 12:00 AM
lol the lightening bolt! great way to torment draco. great work.
person tamargrl
schedule December 17, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Ok, after the first chapter I was a little skeptical, but I decided to give the rest of the story a try. It\'s really good! I found your scene of Hermione over-analyzing her lack of love life to be realistic and funny. And I just love the last bit about Harry Potter haunting Malfoy all the way to his bedchambers. Too funny!
person semperputus
schedule December 17, 2004 at 12:00 AM
The lightening bolt is evil pure evil woman you have a wicked mind!! And who wouldn\'t lust after Draco Don\'t forget you gave me Draco for my birthday (you said that would haunt you) and boy has it made a few of my friends jealous (he he). I can\'t wait for more but I have a bet on a soppy ending like tampons or a more casual ending as in Trials but either way I\'m sure it will be great.
person monokeneko
schedule December 17, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Gods above, that was hilarious!.. Will Hermione really have a \'lightning bolt\' shaved? I\'d rather she didn\'t - that\'ll be the fastest way to kill the mood for a certain silver-haired ferret, won\'t it?..
Fidgeting impatiently in wait for an update - and remember, you\'ve promised to update on daily basis! SY, monokeneko

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