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for The Homerun Blues

by Padfoot

schedule April 18, 2007 at 12:00 AM
i like the way she totally just raped him lol.
schedule April 6, 2007 at 12:00 AM
i love all your story and i love the passion and the heart the characters have for each other
person Sweets
schedule December 24, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I think this story is overall quite interesting and rather unique. Both Draco and Hermione remain in character and I think you build up the tension wonderfully. My only constructive criticism is that while I think a story with smut does need plot, much of yours is just talking about the characters rather than talking about their actions. I hope you understand what I mean, but I found myself scrolling down because it seemed to just go on and on lol. I would cut some of that out, but other than that it's simply lovely!
person cherubbie
schedule November 30, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Wow... FANTASTIC story with an even better ending... WELL DONE!!
person Megan Consoer
schedule November 27, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters? Or can you write a sequel to this story please?
person Ellashy
schedule August 24, 2006 at 12:00 AM
that was just beautifull and cheeky and very funny... you did a great job
person Fawkes feather
schedule August 15, 2006 at 12:00 AM
WOW........ I honestly Don't know When this story was created or maybe I am too lazy to find out but anyway is was a fantastic job! I've told my cousin about this story but I Doubt it if she'll ever read it! Keep it up!
person Enchanted Faery
schedule August 15, 2006 at 12:00 AM
OMG! So far this story has had me laughing! Poor Hermione! Poor Draco! But it's his fault after all! This story totally rocks! I can't wait to finish it! So far I've liked all your fics, looking forward to reading some more of your work! Later!
person Anon
schedule August 14, 2006 at 12:00 AM
This seems like a really good and funny story, I haven't read it yet but am getting ready to and looking forward to it.
person Megan Consoer
schedule August 12, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters? Or can you write a sequel to this story please?

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