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for The Homerun Blues

by Padfoot

person lilil
schedule December 18, 2004 at 12:00 AM
:):)
person semperputus
schedule December 18, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Ohhhhh your evil an evil tease but I love it. So did I get the original or the clone? And you\'ll have to wait to till tuesday to see what you get for your birthday . But I\'ll lone him not willing to give up such a splendid present so willingly but for you mmmm.
Draco is a god are you sure you can cope with two?
P.s No more cloning!!!!
person Amber
schedule December 18, 2004 at 12:00 AM
omg... great, funny... hilarious!... Malfoy actually enjoying himself... hehe.. Love the way you portray Malfoy in this fic and how Ginny is helping Hermione out.. Too funny! If you would, could you please E-mail me when you put up another chapter? I\'ve been dying for some good fanfiction for ages and this is just what I need. Thanks!
person Jay
schedule December 18, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Another great chapter. I thought it was funny the whole waxing shaving thing. Its true though how girls always get worried about their body when relationships get sexual. Its so realistic for you to put that in there. Kudos!
person Kiki Malfoy
schedule December 18, 2004 at 12:00 AM
MMMM....Ch. 5: Yet a wonderfully funny yet sexy chapter if I do say so myself. I\'m still absolutly loving this story and constantly find myself looking for updates at all hours of the day, alwasy awaiting a new chappie....
person Hanna Delacour
schedule December 18, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Very witty and funny fic! The end of chapter 4 I about fell out of my chair I was laughing so hard. The lightning bolt joke is just too great... I\'d say go for it! Thats hysterical... Your writing style and grammar is great! Please update soon, be assured I will be reading. ~ Hanna
person Vixen Malfoy
schedule December 18, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Hehe, as always these next two chapters were absolutely HILARIOUS! Well done, i can\'t wait to find out what\'s going to happen next. It\'s highly amusing seeing the teachers reaction to a situation like this. I find it *interesting* to say the least at Snape\'s and McGonagall\'s dealings. :p Well done and please update soon!
person Elektra Malfoy
schedule December 18, 2004 at 12:00 AM
oh my gosh!!! where did you come up with something like this?!?! it\'s bloody BRILLIANT!!!!

Vixen Malfoy - my best friend and co-writer got me completely hooked on this story! and i tell you i\'m in her debt!!!

i LOVE this story! i can\'t wait to read more!! will you be updating soon? i hope so! i\'m glad that Malfoy is as effected as hermione! *grin* and unfortunately i don\'t think that snape will be that potion ready in time *grin* what a shame! ah well... *smirk*

E Malfoy

p.s. please may hermione NOT wax a scar... in her... hair *shudder* i think Malfoy would refuse to do... anything...
person Yawn
schedule December 18, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Oh, I\'m gushing over with praise for this chapter. Hot to the tenth degree this was! I\'m glad they both got their satisfaction this tiime around. Now I\'m eagelrly awaiting to read what happens next. ^_^
person lala
schedule December 18, 2004 at 12:00 AM
that was great. i cant wait for tomorrow, this whole daily update is very goood.