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need more...I know that this is going to end soon but I really, really like this story.

Happy B-day! ^_^ Thanks again for becoming my beta! I e-mailed you back. And told you all the detals! Update soon! I have too see what happens! ^_^

So I am thinking that I can\'t wait till the 25th. I am so very impressed with your writing. so very very good.

and Happy Birthday :P

it looks like draco struck out, instead of hitting a homerun. but i do love a good game of baseball. lol

Hiya Again!
Wow, i\'m loving the latest twist this story has taken. I feel so sorry for Hermione and what she is going through, but it\'s very good to see that Draco actually has some guilt about it all. They\'re going to have to confront each other eventually about what actually happened and i think that draco has a lot of questions to answer.. for example WHY he did it in the first place??
I can\'t wait to see what happens next and it\'s awesome that you update so regularly. You\'re readers love you for it. I know i sure do. Keeping us in suspense with your stories would just be total torture.
Keep up the AWESOME work.
Love Vixen

I read both this version and the FF.net version. I would like to say that I totally did not enjoy this chapter. AT ALL.
I don\'t really like the way you portrayed Hermione in this chapter although I knpow that it was the potion doing it. But I don\'t think Hermione can face Draco after what has happened. And will she still have to drink the potion? And how will she explain to her professors? I know you would probably explain all these in the later chapters but I just have to say that I don\'t like how Hermione was portrayed in this story. You seem to have turned her into this sex-deprived person and I know it is because of the potion but I still can\'t understand why she has become like this. But I guess I don\'t have to understand. I just have to accept.
By the way, if you don\'t understand what I\'m talking about, don\'t fret about it because I don\'t seem to understand what I\'m talking about either.

This is soo cool i absolutly love keep updating XXX :)

Just wanted to say that, like all your stories, I just adore this one. Aside from potions and the magic and stuff all the characters and emotions and relationships seem so real and authentic, which is such a lovely change from all the PWP out there. Happy Birthday by the way and thanks for gifting everyone else with your great writing ^_~

Well, I don\'t know about everyone else, but I liked that it wasn\'t peaches & cream (Hermione losing her virginity, that is). It rarely ever is, right? And, like you said, that leaves it opened to be \'fixed\'. I don\'t like stories where everything seems to be too good. And I also don\'t like something that\'s too serious either. That\'s why your stories are so great. I love your humor and I do see the whole spoof thing. But, instead of being stupid humor (like a lot of spoof movies), it still has a purpose and feeling. Way to go! Love it, love it, loooooooove it! Kudos on your brilliance and Happy Birthday! I\'m coming up on 26, so I\'m a little past your prime. Enjoy! P.S. It\'s not all it\'s cracked up to be (21, that is).

I hope it does work out... Good thing McGonagall and Snape both think that Draco didn\'t hit \"homeplate\" hehe... McGonagall would flip!... Draco is such a sweetheart though, on the inside, ... i like that, how u gave him a decent heart instead of a cold, black one. Wonder what\'ll happen at the Yule Ball... *grins*... please don\'t tell me it\'s like \"Prom night\" ... *shivers... couldn\'t stand that...