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for The Homerun Blues

by Padfoot

person Jay
schedule December 21, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Oooo the big 21 on the 21st. Happy Birthday! I just turned 21 this year and it was the best by far so enjoy it. That must have stunk when you were little having your birthday so close to christmas. I have two finals tomorrow so Im dreading it Anyways back to your story. That was a great chapter. I like how you write their feelings flawlessly. You get to really see the transition of them falling for each other. Well anyways I hope this is a long enough review to make you happy on your birthday. Have a good one!
person Jay
schedule December 21, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Great Chapter. I thought you were going to have Hermione regret everything but you didnt and Im happy now. Yippee! I hope you had a good birthday! As for me my finals went well today and I have one tomorrow and then FINALLY I can relax and enjoy the holidays!
person FRED AND GEORGE ARE GODSSS GODDAMIT!!!
schedule December 21, 2004 at 12:00 AM
FRED: WOWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWW!!!!!!

GEORGE: GREAT FUCKIN CHAPTER!!!

FRED: I REALLY FEEL BAD FOR THEM. ITS LIKE I SAY, SHAGGING SHOULDNT BE A THESIS OR A ROCKET LAUNCH...ITS UST SHAGGING.

GEORGE: IF IT WAS JUST SHAGGING IT WOULD BE A PORN FLICK YOU CUNT,

FRED: RIGHT, JUST UPDATE SOON MATEY!!!
person Savannah
schedule December 21, 2004 at 12:00 AM
So........

Are they like going to have a like fluffy ending or like........

Shag each other into oblivion..


I gotta know..


hmmmmm.............

UPDATE SOON!
Lotsa Luv
Savannah
person dracoluver
schedule December 21, 2004 at 12:00 AM
one of the best chapters yet keep up the good work and continue to update everyday!
person Pixie
schedule December 21, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I\'m really enjoying this story. I\'ve seen several with the premise that Draco poisons Hermione with a Love/Lust potion, but I really like the idea of having to touch all the bases in order for the potion to be satisfied. I can\'t wait for the next part!
person Bambu
schedule December 21, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I can\'t believe I\'ve missed the last couple of updates... but now I\'ve had several to read all together... what a delicious afternoon snack. Thank you, thank you. I\'ve enjoyed all of your stories, but I think this is my favorite... well certainly one of the top two. I like their vulnerability which they cover up, but not successfully. I look forward to your next update.
person piepiekoh
schedule December 21, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Hello. It\'s me again. I\'m sure you\'re quite tired of reading my reviews since I type a lot of nonsense but I have to say that this chapter has turned out really good and it was what I had hoped for which was different from what I had expected you would have written. I have to ask you something though. Is this going to be like your other story, \'Why Draco Should Not Be Using Tampons\', where Draco tries to hide his sexual attraction towards Hermione? I won\'t really mind if you do tht. And I won\'t mind if you come up with a new story line as well.
person nicky
schedule December 21, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Happy Birthday!!!!!!!!!!!!

and about the chapter: sooooo cute, how they feel guilty and all... *smilesdreamily*

oh, and i like that you actually answer the reviews... that makes me wanna review more often!
person Mercika
schedule December 21, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Another great chapter ... can\'t wait to read the finished result, and to see what realtionship springs upon Draco and Hermione.
~Mercika