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for The Homerun Blues

by Padfoot

person lala
schedule December 22, 2004 at 12:00 AM
i new it wouldnt be soo perfect..
tear...but yay for update. and
cant wait for tomorrow
person Amber
schedule December 22, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Absolutely marvelous! loved the whole awkwardness and everything about this chapter. Good for Hermione to punch Malfoy in the arm... hehe... and for Draco and Hermione to at least kind of admit they like one another. :) ... ok, well, off to bed for me... keep up the great work!!!
person Andrea Malfoy
schedule December 22, 2004 at 12:00 AM
OMG! Update soon! I have too see if Draco and Hermione break up! ^_^
person Amber
schedule December 22, 2004 at 12:00 AM
ooooh... loved this Chapter... Harry needs to get over it though. Ron needs to boil down and Draco\'s father should die a slow and painful death... *grins*. Do not tell me they\'re going to break up now... not after all of this... please? *puppy dog eyes*
person Elektra Malfoy
schedule December 22, 2004 at 12:00 AM
oh dear oh dear OH DEAR!!! Poor Hermione and Draco! *glares at Pansy* i can\'t BELIEVE that she owled Lucius! I mean obviously she wants Draco for herself but REALLY! mer!!! i can\' t believe that it\'s over BEFORE it started!!!

i CAN understand Harry being upset... i mean i probably would be too... but i\'m a little surprised that Ron isn\'t yelling... he really hates malfoy and he *unusally in fan fics* likes Hermione... oh well ur the boss! *grin* do what you please! *nod*

well awesome work! ur so good to all of us updating so regularly! *nod* so thanks for being so awesome! *smile* we don\'t mind at all that you havn\'t responded ot reviews yet! take ur time!! well can\'t wait to see what happens... how many chapters are left??? good luck!

Elektra
person andrea
schedule December 22, 2004 at 12:00 AM
This story is increadibly funny! I love it!
person Gracie
schedule December 22, 2004 at 12:00 AM
excellent chapter....so very good. I can\'t wait to read the next one ;)
person nicky
schedule December 22, 2004 at 12:00 AM
ohhhh, no!!!!!
this just isn\'t fair. *sobsobsob*

good writing though!
person Avanell
schedule December 22, 2004 at 12:00 AM
NOOOO! Just when things were looking happy...no! Please get them back together...or never part to begin with. Let Pansy trip over a nice big cliff. my favorite part here? Draco wanting to jump up and down, then realizing he felt REAL.
person Liz
schedule December 22, 2004 at 12:00 AM
This better have a good ending! Don\'t get all creative and have a plot twist where no one is happy in the end. That would suck majorly! Otherwise, loved the chapter. Pansy\'s always a conniving, manipulative bitch, but those are good sometimes. How was your B-day? Eventful, hopefully.