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for The Homerun Blues

by Padfoot

person Vixen Malfoy
schedule December 23, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Oh man... i feel so bad for Hermione and Draco right now... HOW COULD YOU DO THIS?? :p I guess i didn\'t really expect harry to react like that.. but now i think about it, it actually does make sense.. it\'s just in all Hermione/Draco stories i\'ve never seen harry react in that way to Hermione\'s relationship.. probably because most people emphasise on Ron\'s distaste with the situation *grin* so nice going for the different plot.
As for the letter Draco received from his father.. either it was Pansy pretending to be Lucius or she was the one who told him..
Well i\'m really annoyed that Hermione was talking to her *soon-to-be-ex-boyfriend* mer.. please update soon so we get to find out what\'s going to happen next!
AWESOME WORK AS ALWAYS! LOVE IT!
Love Vixen
person Lorett
schedule December 23, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Padfoot!

OH HOLY CRAP THAT WAS AWESOME!

I LOVE, LOVE, LOVE the idea of hot hallway sex with Draco!

YIPPEE FOR HOT HALLWAY SEX!

I LOVED the pushing the panites aside thing too, very sexy and convenient to boot. hehe!

Anyway, Draco awesome as per I\'ve come to expect from you and I must say I really like your Hermione much better than most portray her.

WONDERFUL, SEXY, APPEALING and a nice little pre-Christmas treat for me to indulge on.

CHEERS until next chapter...(wiping a tear away at the thought)

Lorett
person lala
schedule December 23, 2004 at 12:00 AM
OMG OMG! that was great. and the whole
boy who needs to get layed..was BRILLIANT
and im sad that its ending tomorrow..soo sad
wish it wasnt true...but yea. hope u begin
to write sum more cuz i\'ve enjoyed this greatly
person dragon34
schedule December 23, 2004 at 12:00 AM
i can/can\'t for the next chapter. can, because it\'s the last. can\'t, because, i want to see what they do, if they stay together, or give into what people want. it\'s a great story.
person Frankieluver!!
schedule December 23, 2004 at 12:00 AM
This story has been very awesome, why is there only one chapter left? G2g the o.c. is on!!!!! Ciao!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
person Ryu
schedule December 23, 2004 at 12:00 AM
hehe, Chapter4 remended me of an episode of \'Sex and the city\' I watched once...

Very good...you\'re an excellent writer!
person Amber
schedule December 23, 2004 at 12:00 AM
But the puppy-dog eye thing seems to work so well on most... *grins*.. Ok, Loved this Chapter... :) Harry needs a good kick in the... yea. And i really like how you portray Ron and Harry in this. I always hear how Ron is the hot-headed, fiery tempered Weasley, but in the true books, Harry is more so. Thanks for being true to them, whether intentionally or unintentionally. And for some odd reason, this part stood out to me... Dare I ask if It\'s important later on? How Hermione \"...carelessly dropped her wand\"... no mention of picking it up again later... But I could be looking too much into it.. *shrugs*. Keep up the awesome work! Post soon, as I will be checking back every once in a while... :)
person nicky
schedule December 22, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Awwwwww.... they kissed...again... but for real.... *yayyayyay*

ok, *calmsdown* what I really liked about this chapter was Malfoy asking Hermione to hit him if necessary, that\'s so sweet!
And then there\'s this one scene, when he wonders why he doesn\'t ask her out and then there\'s a pause and then \"He wasn\'t scared of her!\"
I mean ... honestly, I guess about everyone reading that went all ironical and snorted something like \"Yeah, right!\"
And I just love when that happens :D
person semperputus
schedule December 22, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Ohh my god you can\'t do this to me ahhhhhhhhhh
Give me back my Draco I need some stress relief
I hope you had a brilliant birthday and I\'m sorry I can\'t get to a computer tomorrow as this story is compulsive but I\'ll be on christmas eve GMT
I might be worrying about the decrection of this story but your writing is exceptional as always
person Mercika
schedule December 22, 2004 at 12:00 AM
\'Soon-to-be-ex-boyfriend\'? What?!? NO!!!! You cannot do this!!! They are so god-damned perfect for each other!!! PLEASE!!! *Ahem*
What I meant to say is that this is a absolutely great story, and I am frantically waiting for the next updated chapter.
~Mercika