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for Teaching Her

by Kohl

person Mandey
schedule October 17, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Adorable! Absolutely adorable!
person Shadow
schedule May 23, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I\'m not good at reviewing but here\'s my $1.50\'s worth: I liked it. When I read the ending I gave my crually satisfied chuckle. You certaintly left me wanting to read more and I definately think Hermione would be a fighter like you portrayed instead of just breaking to be a slave.

You definately have a way with words and the first person narrative/POV was a fabulous idea. It draws the audience immediately making it all the more personal, which of course is what it\'s supposed to do but is only succesful for a good writer.

You have my loyalty as a reader now and I certainly hope I can find more work by you and if there is none then I await it.

~shadow
person Jadeskye
schedule December 27, 2004 at 12:00 AM
you so need to add another chapter to this. i\'m not usually one for this kind of genre but i love how you\'ve made it subtle
person gili
schedule December 26, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Twisted...I loved it.