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by sabreenthequeen

person dragon34
schedule July 10, 2005 at 12:00 AM
OMG ! Please say you didn\'t kill her and her baby ! Draco deserves some happiness. I love your story, but I thinkthis chapter has to be one of my all time, disliked. I was so upset. But still I eagerly await your next, just to see if I was wrong.
person anonymous
schedule July 8, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Can\'t wait to read what happens next!!
person Liz
schedule July 7, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Hey,

I love the story. Could you by chance e-mail me when you update?? (angl4u2luv@yahoo.com)

Liz
person dragon34
schedule July 5, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Holy moly. I wander who was snapping the pictures. I kind of figured something like that was happening when she was seeing flashes, but i couldn\'t tell
person no1inparticular
schedule June 30, 2005 at 12:00 AM
that was interesting. in a good way. was this the end? or is there more?
person Lrnd
schedule June 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Aww Sweetness!!!!
person dragon34
schedule June 24, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I loved it. I\'m glad you updated, well worth the wait.
person Anon
schedule June 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Very cruel cliffie.
person Anon
schedule June 17, 2005 at 12:00 AM
to be honest, i don\'t think that this is the best thing i\'ve ever read, but still its not that bad and a little sillieness never hurt anyone. i\'m still reading and you are free to go where you want with the characters. what i really object to is the people who read the story then say they think its crap and that you cant write, they are just being unnecessary and unfair. if you dont have anything nice to say then dont say anthing at all! you cant just start claiming to be the expert on good writing so stop acting so pretenciously, get your head out of your arse and try to do something slightly more productive with your time than being mean!
sorry to rant for so long.
Queen of Serpents, one teeny suggestion though, could you try and make them sound a little more british, they are english after all! Carry on the good work and dont be fazed. xxx
person cc
schedule June 4, 2005 at 12:00 AM
ohh more more