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for Temporary

by sabreenthequeen

person Christina
schedule August 5, 2005 at 12:00 AM
This was AWESOME! Thanks for writing a great story :)
person Jenna Malfoy
schedule July 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Remember me? Old faithful reviewer, from fanfiction?

God. I\'ve always loved this story, but you knew that right?

This ending was absolutley perfect. Made me cry like a baby. I can\'t believe that I had forgotten all about fanfiction for so long. And i was going through the pages at fanfiction, and read the last four chapters. Absolutley perfect.

I thought I was going to KILL you when you broke them up. But, it all works out, doesn\'t it? I can\'t believe you made me cry. But you did it well.

This\'ll always be my favorite fanfiction. That\'s not Temporary.
person slyswn
schedule July 20, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I don\'t even know if you\'ll get around to reading this review... probably not but I just wanted to congratulate you on doing it once again. As usual I envy you. 30 glorious chapter with a happy ending, that\'s my kinda story. You truly are one of my fave writers QueenofSerpents

rock on!
person nat
schedule July 18, 2005 at 12:00 AM
that was great i loved the ending
you were right in your note some of the questions did go unanswered but that really didn\'t matter cause all i care about is that draco and hermione get together in the end
person tralala
schedule July 17, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Firstly,
congrats for finishing this fic.

even though i thought they wouldn\'t end up together, but you still let them be together!

woo hoo!

PS i think this story\'s a little AU cos\' of HBF that would revolutionize the whole fanfic world to be AU too. ((:
person Brianna
schedule July 16, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Omfg! I love ur story, I have followed it all the way from fanfiction.com, Your story made me feel along with the character, when you can feel their emotions you know that you are reading a good story. I hope that u write many other fanfics so i can also follow those!!
person Anon
schedule July 15, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Your narrative skills are far the best i have come across Queen of Serpents. I read most of your other work. But this one blows them away, so I had to write and tell you.. Congratulations for the wonderful talent of yours and keep writing, who knows you could be the next JKR;) and plz post more than one chapter. I can
person Kris
schedule July 15, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Wow...What an amazing story! I mean I\'m breathless, seriously. Wow! That truly was a good story! The twists, the turns it was all amazing! It leaves you kind of speechless in a good way. Amazing job again!

Kris
person LittleOne89
schedule July 15, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Amazing, captivating story. When I heard that you were completing it yesterday I couldn\'t wait for it to come out. Wonderful finish and you had me captivated from the beginning.
person sesshomaru\'s koi
schedule July 14, 2005 at 12:00 AM
DAMN YO I HATE THOSE DAMN FUCKING CLIFFY. OMFG(OH MY FUCKING GOODNESS) I CAN\'T BELIEVE IT HERMIONE IS GON TO DIE. WHERE THE FUCK IS MALFOY WHILE ALLL OF THIS IS HAPPENING HUH???? I HOPE THAT THAT SPELLL IS REVERSABLE OH GOD I REALLY DO HOPE SO. OH PLEASE OH PLEASE WRITE MORE PLEASE OH PLEASE UPDATE THE NEXT CHAP SOON.