rate_review Reviews

I like it a lot.
PLEASE.
UPDATE.
SOON.
kthnxbai <3 ~

I am very glad that you updated so quickly. Although the part magical creature idea is cliche, I hope that you have a few original ideas up your sleeve.

I like where you\'re going with this. Have you, by any chance, posted this before? On another site maybe? Just curious...

Oh, I\'ve read this one on your site, and I\'ve absolutely loved it, just like other stories also, but isn\'t it was left unfinished forever? Are you planning to continue or it will always stays a cruel tease like it was before? :)

Great! I want more... :-)
The fisrt chapter was a bit over-analysed for me - you spelled out the inner motivations of the characters to such extent that it 1-was tiering and 2-it left nothing for the reader to do. We would enjoy understanding their inner world gradually from their words and actions. Some help from the narrator is good, but not that much.
I only mean this as constructive critisism. I am enjoying the story very much.

hey, are you going to continue this story? i really liked it. it was great.

This story is amazing. A truly amazing concept. Just wondering if you have read the Dark Series by Christine Feehan as your story is slighly similar to them. Meaning the whole they need to touch and be close to each other, and being able to feel each others emotions.
You might like the books, although they revolve around hetrosexual relationships. You may or may not like that, if its not too bold to say.
I really like the way you have involved such detail. Because quite a lot of the stories I\'ve read of fanfiction sites jump into all the action and steamy stuff. But I think its great that you\'re taking the time to go through the process of explaining the bond between them and their reactions.
Well I think I\'ve babbled on for long enough, so bye. xxx

P.S. I hope you write more soon as I can\'t wait to read it.

I\'m back. And I\'ve just went to find more of your stories and I read about you. And you obviously won\'t enjoy reading those books. No worries, I just babble too much. xxx

Brilliant! I love it! It\'s facinating, fun, entertaining...wonderful! Can\'t wait to see what happens with it! [esp. with a two week isolation!] :) Keep up the good work!

I just finished reading this story on restrictedsection and was awed. I liked the plot very much and the way thinghs evolve, but I have one simple thing to ask: What the hell happened to Voldie and the rest of the Wizarding World?! Not that I\'m questioning your story, but... That kind of leaves us in total dark about the people that Harry once cherished as friends, like the Weasleys or Hermione (not mentioning the old manipulating fool, he overdoes it even in the books).
I hope that I have not insulted anybody, the story is superb, but leaves me a bit confused (maybe I should read it again?!).

Hope for more excellent work (maybe even a sequel - a girl can dream, after all).

Joanne Minna