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for The Naughty games

by Eveline

person anniea
schedule January 15, 2009 at 12:00 AM
please update soon *kisses*
person Joey
schedule July 20, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Cute, if cliche. I believe the phrase is \"Turnabout is fair play\".
person the zedmeister
schedule July 20, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Aw... damn. I was really enjoying this, it\'s so rare to find Harry topping Snape and Draco. I guess I\'ll have to give the sequel a pass.
person antipyro
schedule July 20, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Great idea, two pregnant men and Harry the father to both of them??? Talk about double Jeopardy!!!

Can\'t wait for the next chapter you hinted at.

post soon.
person Marie
schedule July 19, 2005 at 12:00 AM
That was great, hope to see the sequel soon.
person Katie K
schedule July 17, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Ooh I love that! Love this story and can\'t wait for \"turn about is fair play\" or whatever it\'s called :-)
person JiyuHatellKodai
schedule July 12, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I was taking my time coming around to this and I wished I had waited another two hours at the least. XD I cracked up laughing so loud my sister was yelling at me to go to bed.

Please continue these naughty little games of yours.
person Missi
schedule July 4, 2005 at 12:00 AM
OMG *fans self* guh....just too hot! Can\'t wait to see what they do to help Draco feel not so \"left out\"
person antipyro
schedule July 3, 2005 at 12:00 AM
They just get bolder and bolder don\'t they? *snickers*

The Library was great, I\'m surprised no one caught them there or even came around to maybe catch them. I had a hard time imagining the two over the couch and how Harry could prepare them both and still snog Severus. Is he a contortionist? Anyways, great effects in the end, no pun intended.

The dinner was the best. Shades of Flashdance, or what????!!!!!! I\'m surprised there wasn\'t any footsie foreplay.

I wonder how Harry and Severus kept their voices down while in the Great Hall????

Please post the next chapter soon, I really like your writing.
person Missi
schedule June 26, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Thanks for the update!! Yummy Smutty Goodness!!