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December 17, 2007 at 12:00 AM
So far so good. I like that you made Harry come into his powers slowly and at the same time made him twice as strong as merlin please UPDATE and keep this story rolling it's very light, but very interesting and flow very well. CHEERS!!!!
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July 26, 2007 at 12:00 AM
please continue the story and thank you
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January 3, 2007 at 12:00 AM
r u ever gonna update this story? y did u stop?
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January 7, 2006 at 12:00 AM
really great story, but please make chapters a lot longer, i want to read more badly
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November 6, 2005 at 12:00 AM
You really should practice making the story longer... you write way too compact or whatever i can say... you have to make it fill more before it will be a truly good story...
fill in more feelings and so on and put in more specifics instead of just skipping it all and hurrying along.
else, good idea for a story.
fill in more feelings and so on and put in more specifics instead of just skipping it all and hurrying along.
else, good idea for a story.
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September 20, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Oh, you should definitely continue. I don\'t really have an opinion about dark or light Harry, maybe I\'ve been too influenced by Petalsoft (I\'m her beta). There is no light without the dark. It became clear in Book 6 that Riddle had never loved anyone. If Harry stays grounded in love, it wouldn\'t matter if he strayed to the dark side.
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September 17, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I love this story please update.
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July 23, 2005 at 12:00 AM
more please & a good harry
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February 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I think that the story is really good. I think that you should make Harry good. I don\'t know if I would read it if Harry was evil. Anyway keep him good and keep on writing.
Nichole
Nichole
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February 14, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I think you should make harry good not evil, after all the family members he lost to the dark side you would think he would want revenge.
P.S.
loved the story cant wait for more!
P.S.
loved the story cant wait for more!