rate_review Reviews

The prophecy was incorrect, it was supposed to be a boy born in a certain year, either Harry or Neville, but aside from that, it\'s all cool.

Well, except that the sister thing was unnescessary- your story was great without it, and it almost took away from the events preceeding the end, almost. The problem being what with their relationship suddenly so strained as it was, it was a good enough plot point to have ended it there with the whole kiss and make up scene, but it does add some more depth to it. It leaves more of an impression that the boy had been used his whole life. I do get the impression that was the general thought behind the original books or so I gathered from Harry\'s POV, so its ok to have built off of that. I\'ve always thought Dumbledore was a bit of an ass.

Nice ending, and I would be interested to see what else Snape could come up with to get Harry to be more dominant, but this leaves it to the imagination quite nicely.

*eyes grow bigger and bigger*
Whheeee! ( o my, I\'m actually squeeling fangirlishly)
The end, wow I loved it:)
At first I got a bit scared when you wrote about Paris, but you did the exact opposit of what I feared that would happen, and for that I only adore you more.
I think you should write more HP, because you\'re getting the hang of it and you writing skills are awsome.
I read another review of someone who suggested that you should sell your stories, and I can\'t agree more.
the story had my attention all the way, and I usely get bored easily.
You ended this perfectly, and I may have been hell to write it, but we..want more (?:P)

I\'m curious of what you\'re going to write next, and best wishes to your obesely fat muse!

Ai, your biggest fangirl.

Holy Shit. You wrote this wonderfuly. Like i said before, its one of the more realistic Snarry fics I have ever read. IT was wonderful. I couldnt get enough of it. And I love the way you had snape act. it seemed so real. The whole thing seemed like JKROWLING wrote it just used your pen name.

Good job, on finishing it. and I would like to read another Harry Potter fic from you, I don\'t know enough about LOTR to read a fic because I have only seen the movies and read part of the hobbit. BUt yes anohter harry Potter fic would be good to get from you.

ANd I bow down to the most awesome SNARR WRITIER EVER I AM YOUR SLAVE ....lol not really but ill give you a cyber cookie and hot chocolote.

Wonderful story,
Julia

Oh yea, a sequil to this would be nice too... ::runs off::

I have followed this for ages and think that it\'s Fantastic! I think you captured the characters really well and even if they\'re not quite the way J.K. writes them you\'ve made them your own and given us a really beautiful story. I think this is actually my favourite Harry/Snape Fiction - Well Done!

! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! Thank you!!!!!!!!

I loved this story!!!!

I just wanted you to know that I found your magnificent story and stayed up 13 hours to read the first 53 Chapters with rapt attention. Stirring, riveting and just plain sexy, WOW! All the angst that you went through is most gratefully appreciated. Please consider doing more in HP Fan fic. Now, to finish the last two chapters.

God I loved this fic. I have checked on the updates almost daily and I could never get enough and you should definitly not stick to LOTR! I love your writting. Love and kisses Devi.

Sorry, there\'s just no way the prophesy could have meant Paris, because she wasn\'t born that year at the end of July. Only Harry and Neville. When Paris was born, Lily and James had not yet defied Voldemort 3 times.

Beautiful story. I absolutely loved it. I didn\'t start reading til it already had 49 chapters, so I didn\'t have to wait long for it to be finished, but if I had started reading it with it only having a few chapters I would have been tortured out of my mind waiting for the end. It was fantastic!