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April 2, 2005 at 12:00 AM
oh man that is one awesome story!!! romantic and yet keeping perfectly to the characters! *big happy sigh*
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March 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I please tell me that\'s not the only HP story you plan to write....?!? as for your comments on English and grammar I wouldn\'t worry about it the story was enough to keep my attention off of it. I loved the story !
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March 23, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Well, I\'m a sucker for a good Snarry with a happy ending and this was just it :o)
In short, I loved the story. I\'ve spent the last three days on and off reading the whole lot and it was definately worth it!
Some loose ends and stuff but all in all: YUM!
In short, I loved the story. I\'ve spent the last three days on and off reading the whole lot and it was definately worth it!
Some loose ends and stuff but all in all: YUM!
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March 8, 2005 at 12:00 AM
OMG OMG OMG OMG OMG *cries* I love this story soo much!!! You are such a good writer! I adore you!!!!!!!!!!
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March 8, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I loved it! So wonderful. All the emotionsl ups and downs. Perfect.
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March 5, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I just finished the whole story and this are my thoughts. You don\'t do yourself justice, Riffraff. I loved the fic! Your gramar is good, your descriptions are good and your lemons are good. I think you write good HP fiction, and I hope you continue writing HP/SS fiction. I love mush - can\'t get enough of it- but I like a drop of angst in a story to spice it up. The only fault I see is that you tend to drag things a bit too much out. Besides that, I couldn\'t ask for a better fic.
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March 5, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Me again. I just want to add that I agree with Anita; the bit with Paris was a bit unnecessary. I also think the bit with Neville revealing their relationship was a bit silly. Critisism, critisism. *blushes* Okay, I\'m finished now. Honest. Bye, bye.
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March 3, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I\'ve thoroughly enjoyed reading this story.
I liked your characterisations of Harry and Severus and I liked the idea of possession. Very original.
the only thing that I thought was a bit farfetched, unbelievable and unnecessary was the bit about Harry having a sister in the penultimate part. You may not have meant it that way, but to me it came across as a tool to get them to shag before they had to talk about Severus hitting Harry. Personally I felt Severus hitting Harry deserved a better way of being dealt with, than to be included in the aftermath of the sister-subplot.
That aside, I repeat what I said. I have thoroughly enjoyed the story.
Overall your plot was very well thought out :)
I liked your characterisations of Harry and Severus and I liked the idea of possession. Very original.
the only thing that I thought was a bit farfetched, unbelievable and unnecessary was the bit about Harry having a sister in the penultimate part. You may not have meant it that way, but to me it came across as a tool to get them to shag before they had to talk about Severus hitting Harry. Personally I felt Severus hitting Harry deserved a better way of being dealt with, than to be included in the aftermath of the sister-subplot.
That aside, I repeat what I said. I have thoroughly enjoyed the story.
Overall your plot was very well thought out :)
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March 2, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I say a wonderful story, complicated that it took so many canon things and questioned it. Fascinating piece of work
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March 2, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Overall this fic is one of my favorites, I won\'t forget it anytime soon!