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for Love, Lies & Loneliness

by harriet

person vbollman(nsi)
schedule November 11, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Okay. I\'ve reread it. and i STILL LOVE IT. the relationship between harry and snape is wonderful. I\'ve cried, laughed and almost screamed in frustration with this one. Thank you so much for writing such a woderful story.

Luvs ya.
person vbollman(nsi)
schedule November 11, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I LOVED IT. that said, i\'m gonna stop reviewing and go back and read it again.


Later
person Wren
schedule November 5, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I am sorry that I did not review chapter by chapter...I like doing one longer comment. You know Quality over Quanity. Anyways, I have to say that this is the best Harry Snape story that I have ever read. The smut was not crude or cliche, and their were two parts that I liked a lot. One was how Draco blew the smoke into Harrys mouth. The just seemed incredibly erotic to me. I love how you wrote Draco in this....and the part with the red hair and him wearing a Jumper? Brilliant!

The other part that I really liked was the thought of Harry Running about in a towel. That made me giggle way too much and for that I thank you. I also got all teary eyed at the end so yeah for you! I cant wait to see what else you have written and I promise to do so when I get back from work tonight....the only fault of this story was it was long. Far from boring but I get lazy...I need a nap. BYE!
person barbarataku
schedule October 25, 2005 at 12:00 AM
No email reply needed. I appreciate the time and energy you have spent on this HP story. We hope you do not desert us and go back to LOTR to create. The story was interesting and had several new wizard facts, for your story only, that I found interesting. I liked the way you handled the characters. Draco is just soooo funny. The theme of lies half lies, or unspoken words seem to play a big part in this story although it seems like what is not said is more dangerous. Thanks for sharing and as far as I am concerned deserves a 5 star rating. This was one of those stories that as soon as you find it you want to read all that is available before reviewing..
person Jeff
schedule October 12, 2005 at 12:00 AM
ok this is the frist harry and snape fic i ever read and i love it and im a dir hard harry and draco fan i just got board there cuase i read em all twice and i had to move on lol back to the review you wright really good stories and i liked all the ones ive read so far and don\'t worry no one has perfect grammer

Jeff
person menecarkawan
schedule October 6, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I like your story overall so far, but I have a few questions/comments. First off, I\'m curious to know how Sirius came back after the Veil incident, or is this completely AU and he never fell in at all? Also, your timeline is a bit off, because they don\'t return to school until a month after Harry\'s birthday. Aside from that, I\'m enjoying it. On to the next.
person Menecarkawan
schedule October 6, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Harry living with the Slytherins... this should be interesting. I think Dumbledore may have finally lost his mind.

On a side note: It\'s spelled Voldemort, with an \'e\'. I\'m sure some else has probably already mentioned it, but, there you go... *shrugs*
person Genee
schedule August 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I loved it. The story had a great plot both Snape and Harry went through trials and hardship and joy and happiness. So your story was beautiful written in my opinion. You should be proud of it.
person tragicsleep
schedule July 21, 2005 at 12:00 AM
i adore this story! your talent never stops to amaze me. i\'m not sure which story i like best: this one or the other severus/harry one i\'ve read by you. either way,they are both favourites of mine. thank you for giving us the pleasure of such wonderful fiction. take care.
person sethian
schedule June 13, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I really hope Harry\'s gonna get his revenge for this one, Malfoy is really an ass.
Your story is fantastic. ^.^