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I still don't get it. How did Harry suddenly put all those pieces together. The only one I even got was the potions speech. Why did Harry ask about everyone's health when they were just in the great hall? And why the bloody hell was Snape screwing Lucius!?!

you do know that they are in england right? and you DO know that in england it's called football not soccer right? FOOTBALL! i donno why you americans seems determined to change a perfectly good word and use it for something else when the entire world uses the word football....

I just finished reading your wondeful story in almost one sitting. Hmmmm Wonder if my husband is still alive.... Oh well, I'll check later. I know that some readers complained about the grammar and such but I say..if they are not intllegent enough to read around any mistakes, then they have no business reading fan fiction at all. I loved your writing and the story was exciting enough to keep me going no matter what. I only have one tiny unimportant question. What was done to Vernon? Sirius just told Harry that Vernon was taken care of. As nosey as I am, I would like to know exactly what Sirius did to him. (evil grin) I could probably come up with other questions but the story as a whole was just too good to worry about them. Keep up the good work and I look forward to reading more. :)

I love this story, absolutely adorable :) I don\'t remember if you ever told us what happened to Dursleys, though, but that\'s not too important anyway :) You are one genius of a writer!

My, yes!! That tutorig scene in ch. 35 was simply hot! Very educationa!. But then motivation helps immensely, and both parties had plenty of that. Wonderful chapter!

I just discovered this story, and am immensely enjoying it - Harry is such a hormonal teen!! And Snape is being so much a more mature, normal, though in-character snarky, powerful wizard. But, as a person who is nearly blind as a bat without my glasses, and knowing hom much a new prescription costs, and the difference in vision etween old & new glasses - I cannot help but feel for Harry being stuck with his old glasses!! Did Snape get Harry's new glasses back to him, and it's just a detail you haven't mentioned yet??

Okay, first I'd like to tell you that I've read all of your stories and you are one of my favorite authors. I just had a couple things that kind of bothered me. Just things that a BETA would catch. Words that I caught that were misspelled:
Lucius = Lucious
afraid = affraid
hoped = hopped
There were a couple others but I can't remember them. But I loved the story, I really did!

love it, just thought I would let you know... wished it would have gone further, maybe a sequal, with them being married or bonded or something and whatever

So I've just started reading this and already I'm interested. You seem to be very good at capturing beginnings. =). By the way, I like your screen name....might it be from Rocky Horror Picture Show?

~Riisa Holeva

Another great job! Your fics are imaginative and addicting to read. I just knew that Draco wouldn't be such an ass when given the chance. I've also laughed so hard and so much (Snape's wand, hehehehe) that my neighbors are probably wondering what the hell I've been doing.

I must admit that when I got to the authors notes at the end of Chapter 53 and you stated that there would not be a fluffy ending, I had a sinking feeling along the lines of *someone dies* or *no more Snarry*.
Also, and please don't take this the wrong way or anything, I truly enjoy your stories, and you did address this in an authors note section, but your english, and giving Harry blue eyes instead of green, leave a bit to be desired. I have never beta'd a story before, but I will be willing to check over any Harry Potter stories you write in the future. I am very meticulous.