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for Love, Lies & Loneliness

by harriet

person Serpenteyes
schedule January 13, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I simply love this story! *sighs happily* But could you please speed up the passion between Harry and Snape?
person Moi
schedule January 13, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Good. Nothing like making Harry work his arse off to get where he\'s supposed to be. There will be, of course, fringe benefits for all his hard work? Looking forward to the next update.
person alliekatgal
schedule January 12, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Hey, this story is great. Well written, with an interesting premise. I just came across it, so I was able to gorge on all the chapters at once! Really looking forward to more!
person lisa23
schedule January 12, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I\'m really enjoying this. I like the way Draco is trying to work Harry into Slytherin now. Perhaps he wants to convert him? Lure him away from Griffindor? Anyway, chocolate frogs to you!
person Ditzy
schedule January 12, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I\'m still really enjoying this and am looking forward to reading more
person Papaya
schedule January 12, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Still a very good read! Looking forward to more. Are Harry and Draco going to actually become friends, or is it going to continue to be more just a cessation of hostilities? Thanks for the great entertainment, and please update soon.
person Papaya
schedule January 12, 2005 at 12:00 AM
*bearing gifts of chocolate frogs and butterbeer for your muse* Another great update! Harry gets high . . . what fun! I\'m almost inclined to think that perhaps something more should have happened at that party, but it\'s understandable that nothing more did. Are we going to find out exactly what Severus was doing watching Harry at practice? Are we going to get some good clean Snarry fun soon? Can\'t wait to read your next update! As always, thanks for the great entertainment, and please update soon!
person limless goldfish
schedule January 12, 2005 at 12:00 AM
hmmmmmm XD
youre an updating maniac you know that? XD
That\'s the way uhuhuhuh I like it!
Here\'s your review:p now be a good author and write!:P
I luv this.
person E
schedule January 11, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Love the story. How long before something happens between Snape and Harry?
person Nova
schedule January 10, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I like and I don\'t like this fic. I disagree with you in somethings, like the veritaserum. Harry doesn\'t only answer the questions, but he has to tell more? Why? If I ask you \'did you kill this person?\' you wouldn\'t answer that \'no, but I did kill that one\'. Other one is the whole slythering deal. Who puts a boy with practically no means to defend in a dorm that is known to be hostile towards him? And the only safety is a teacher that one: hates him (or so he thinks), two: can\'t really act. So maybe Snape can help him with his magic, but what does it help if he is killed before it?

But like I said, I also like this fic. The telling is smooth and does not just jump in one place to other. I can\'t wait to see what happens! And the fic has an actual plot too, nice:) I like the way Snape is and I like the way Potter is and won\'t you put them do cute things to each other?;) And lynch to Malfoy!