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for Love, Lies & Loneliness

by harriet

person heyy13
schedule January 25, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Its makes perfect sence. Keep writeing!! XD
person armpit
schedule January 25, 2005 at 12:00 AM
aaaah!^^ this was so cool!
5 chapters in one, ah, thank you.
I really like your style of writing, and you do a good job at axplaining things:)
It was a really cool idea, although, maybe you shouldn\'t update too much;) (one or two chapters per day is enough?:P)
I hate it when people don\'t update, but I also abhor the fact that some stories end so fast;)
so don\'t go too fast:P and it will give you more r&r\'s??

you so rule.
person Kat
schedule January 25, 2005 at 12:00 AM
This makes perfect sense to me. I\'m loving it. I don\'t want Harry to forgive Severus so easily though, what he did was really hurtful and to not have apologised or done anything makes me feel so bad for poor Harry\'s pain. And plus if he holds out the making up will be even sweeter, mmm.... Love it, great job, thanks for sharing.

Hugs

Kat
person Aly
schedule January 25, 2005 at 12:00 AM
5 chapters!!! Whoooooooo!!!!!!! With the first couple of chapters (from this update) I was a little confused, but then after I read the ch. 33, where you explained everything, the light bulb came on and it was like, \"yeah, ok. That makes sense now.\" And I LOVED chapter 34 with Draco taking Harry\'s clothes. I\'m definately looking forward to Harry\'s detention. ;)
person Cat
schedule January 25, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Wohoo! Great story...puhlease update soon :)
person maggie36
schedule January 25, 2005 at 12:00 AM
OMG! That last chapter was sooo funny. That was such a slytherin thing to do. I can\'t wait for the next chapter. It\'s so hard to find good Harry/Severus fics, and I love yours.
person elven
schedule January 25, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Right. As said, way too many spelling errors. The most annoying ones repeated time and time again are Voldomort and Lilly. Need I even say that it should be Voldemort and Lily... Please, just use a simple search-and-replace function in MS Word.
person Chys
schedule January 24, 2005 at 12:00 AM
This is one of the best stories I have ever read for this pairing, Really!
I love what you\'ve done with it!
More?


now?


please?


-Chys.
person mac
schedule January 24, 2005 at 12:00 AM
making sense, making sense! can\'t wait to see how this all turns out! I was really confused before the new chaps were up, but now I get it!
person annie
schedule January 23, 2005 at 12:00 AM
fantabulous.

if possible, please send me an email letting me know when you make your next update!

-Annie