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me me me !!!! I wanna see some dangling bits!!!!! To \'F\' with grammar and spelling!!!!!! bits bits bits VEG!!!

Ooh, it\'s getting REALLY good!


Can\'t wait for more!
Is it posted elsewhere?


Chys

Interesting story, but the errors are distracting. Please learn the difference between plural and possessive! And a beta can help find the spelling errors that Spell Check won\'t find.

HOT.

*throws hands in air*
SNAPE-BITS! SNAPE-BITS! SNAPE-BITS! SNAPE-BITS!
give me my SNAPE-BITS!

Wheeeeeeeeeeeee! Yay. It makes me so happy when you post a new chappie. (And we\'re not left dangling in the wind quite so much any more, so I can\'t call you names.) And do keep writing, because if this is you needing practice, I can\'t wait to read more. :)
ps- if you ever need a beta.... you know, for that pesky grammar and all... *waves frantically and jumps up and down* Ooh me, ooh me!

Can I tell you how much I loved chapter 35? YUMM!!! A nice tutorial with Draco showing Harry what to do with his fingers would not be unwelcome... ;) And yes, yes, I am very much interested in Snape\'s dangly bits. :D Please. please put another chapter up soon.

Uh...come on :D don\'t let us hanging there *lol*

I really enjoy your story and enjoy that you let Snape, Harry and us readers alike build up with tension ;)
But PLEASE relief us all after such a long time hahaha!!

Thanks for updating so regularly & your great work.

Cat

Please update soon! I love your story, and who cares about wrong spelling, grammar and suchlike anyway? *Holds up a platter filled with delicious gourmet food for your muse* Enjoy!

Imust be honest here. I my self have not really seen or noticed any grammer or spelling mistacks. seeing as my grammer, spellin and pucuation suck big time. anyway... you update much faster then most of the other autors I like. good thing that. anyway... I like this story and now I am going to be a bit ansy about waiting for the sex part of the story but I can wait untill you get around to it. keep up the good work and keep updating. I just felt like reviewing your story.
spaz

Listen, I just spent hours reading this story and that is not a good way to leave off. I need more and quick. I hope you update soon or I may cry or have a breakdown of some sort. I love the way you made Harry innocent, an innocent Harry is always best. Loved how he had to ask Draco how things were done. Draco/Harry friendship was well written. I think you should make Snape mad and possessive about Harry being all naked (sorta) in the great hall. He should be all \"youre mine\" and \"no one but me can see you like that\" hehehe. Im bad. Kissing would be cool, more would be great.

thanks,
Jen