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You leave it right there? With Harry going down to wait for Snape in his office, his pants full of cum...

I gotta tell you, I loved the Draco/Harry scene. Yumm...

Now post more please. And whoever is complaining about your English skills can go @#%& themselves. Fanfiction is supposed to be fun, not professional. Just like going out to \'shoot some hoops\', you don\'t breakout the basketball handbook.

38 was the best chapter yet, damn that was a good one, any more on the way soon please?

Please?


Pretty please?

I love you, I love you, I love you, I love you, I love you... but if you don\'t update SOON with at least TWO chapters, I swear to all that is Holy, I will hunt you down, and TICKLE YOU TO DEATH!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

I can\'t believe I waited this long to read this story, but now I wish I had waited a bit longer, so that YOU COULDN\'T TORMENT ME!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! When are they going to eventually fuck, anyway? Erm... ok, I didn\'t just swear. I don\'t swear. I\'m a nice girl. :)

But I will hurt you. I swear. ok, maybe not, because if you live more than an hour away from me, I\'m going to have to find some money. But please update within... oh, I\'ll be generous... the next thirty seconds... and then I won\'t hurt you.

Remember, at least two chapters!!!!!

Pulling out his crumpled timetable Harry spelled a duplicate copy, minus the extra lessons Snape had put in at the beginning of the year. With the new crisp copy in his hand Harry crumpled up the old one and shoved it into his trunk before going about crinkling the new one so that it looked used and worn.

SO how come it wasn\'t found in the trunk?
*asking the plot related question*

Good fic otherwise, so don\'t let flamers get you down, you don\'t read a fic for the spelling you know!

DH

Oh, and it\'s VOLDEMORT. Not VOLDOMORT. VOLDEMORT. lol. not that ur probably going to be mentioning the name again, it was just grating on my nerves.

Yes, I am a perfectionist. With spelling. Not, as u can see, with the whole shortcuts thing (u instead of you, etc).

Blah.

10 seconds remaining.

Oh, and since I know people correcting ur spelling grates on UR nerves, I forgot the evil little laugh. mwahaha!!

AND THE 30 SECONDS IS UP!!! WITH NO UPDATES!!!!! NOT HAPPY!!!!!!! lol

Yeah, I\'m psychopathic. Deal with it. :-P

Ok, I\'ll stop bombarding u with reviews (three reviews counts as bombarding!!!!!) now, just PPPLLLEEEAAASSSEEE update SSSOOOOOONNN!!!!!

Whew! That was a doozy!
re: english students... You know, I\'m usually anal retentive about grammar and spelling, but with your story, I gotta say...I\'m kinda distracted by the story line. Now, I don\'t want to insult anyone, but what the hell are they doing paying more attention to the grammar than this fabulous plot? Ignore the schmucks. And update as much as you please, because the smart ones here are going, \"More, more, faster, faster...\" And maybe something else, but I\'m not going to speak for anyone else on that matter. *smirk*

Yay!! More chapters! I LOVE this story! I can\'t wait to see what Snape wants to talk to Harry about. ;) hehehe

Definitely needs work on spelling and grammar. Character names and other words are misspelled, wrong words are used throughout (for example, you use \"cause\" when you mean \"because\"), and plurals are used as possessives (and vice versa). Just because you\'re not being paid doesn\'t mean you shouldn\'t take the time to write correctly. Other people are taking the time to read it, so it should be as good as you can make it. You owe your readers that much. Reading this is like going for a walk and enjoying the beautiful scenery, but constantly having to dodge large rocks along the way. The rocks - the spelling and grammar errors - are that distracting. They interrupt the flow of the story. I probably won\'t finish it, because there are so many others that are written well. At best, I may skim this to see what happens, but I\'ll sit back and truly enjoy the well-written stories. If you want an example, check out A Year Like None Other by Aspeninthesunlight. beautifully written!

Not an English teacher? Well, neither am I, dear \"Rafriff\". Anyway, the plot is still quite above the ordinary.